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by tasukigirl

schedule May 29, 2008 at 12:00 AM
Heehee.... I wonder what phase 2 is? >.> Thanks for updating!
person Mehla Seraphim
schedule May 29, 2008 at 12:00 AM
Waaa! Write more soon!
person SamuraiSaaya
schedule May 29, 2008 at 12:00 AM
Ohh! Jealous Gaara ;) And flirtacious Sasuke. I love them all, they're just all so smexy! Can't wait to see what phase two is :)
person Raineko
schedule May 29, 2008 at 12:00 AM
Please hurry with phase 2! Please! Need more yaoi goodness! Uh hum. Anyway. Yes, very good story. I thought this story wouldn't have Sasuke in it. But I am so glad it does!
schedule May 28, 2008 at 12:00 AM
Ack! What criticism!? Fantastic. My only complaint is that there isn't more!

I adore how perfectly you characterized Sasuke, and the roles you've given them fit like a glove!
schedule May 21, 2008 at 12:00 AM
Ohmigosh! You turned Matsuri into a minx! :x


Great chapter. Gaara makes for some wicked revenge. hehehe. Keep up the great work!
schedule May 21, 2008 at 12:00 AM
Ooo! Gaara is kinky! I need more!!
person SamuraiSaaya
schedule May 20, 2008 at 12:00 AM
Holy crap, Gaara you're sly. Trying to get Naruto's reaction, eh?

The naked woman was absolutely hilarious. I'm glad Naruto found out though, that would have been SO humiliating. The war goes on and it's just heating up. Jealous!Naruto is so amusing, but a jealous Gaara would make my day.

Wonder what the next prank will be. Loved this chapter.

Please update soon :)
person charmpit
schedule May 20, 2008 at 12:00 AM
OMFG Gaara is a COCKTEASE!

I am loving this fic.
schedule May 20, 2008 at 12:00 AM
You did a really great job with the set up for Gaara's prank. I liked your pacing, and you do wonderfully with dialog. I hope you continue. It's a really enjoyable read.