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December 6, 2009 at 12:00 AM
OMGOODNESS WHAT ARE YOU DOING!!! ONE CHAPPY!! hehehe i really like the idea you have set up and i really like thte whole thisg its so detailed and .......why is there only ONE chappy!!! i am now a fan of this fic hehehe yes so thanks for the posting and does he wake up Naruto??? That would be extreamly cool if naruto was somekind of a genius and he doesn't even need to go to school in order to take over the family busnis and itachi is ver interesting the way you have him set up oh and the daddy haahahah you said fuck.......... what a cliffy though that wasn't very nice of you!!!! and yes i do like it if i havnt' stated that yet. :)
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May 31, 2008 at 12:00 AM
What an original idea, at least from what I've seen/read. I like it! I think between this and the other story you have up here this is the one that has me the most intrigued. I hope/wonder if Naruto's parents are still alive, it wasn't clear in the story. It would be a shame for him never to have seen them again. Looking forward to the next chapter.
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May 29, 2008 at 12:00 AM
well, i was amused. it was definitely interesting, though rather ooc. i might return if i see an update at sometime, so be sure to keep writing.~
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May 17, 2008 at 12:00 AM
I love Itachi and Sasuke's interactions. Looking forward to the next chapter.
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May 17, 2008 at 12:00 AM
talking to unconsious people gets you alot...sometimes,or half awake people who will agree to anything as long as you shut up and let them sleep. hope you can update soon
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May 11, 2008 at 12:00 AM
it would suck to be a vegitable for 17yrs,hope you can update soon
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May 9, 2008 at 12:00 AM
AHHHH! Is it supposed to be so short!? Please say there is more!
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May 9, 2008 at 12:00 AM
Interesting! I cant wait for more!
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May 9, 2008 at 12:00 AM
i like the idea of this story and i am excited to see where it will lead. how many brothers does naruto have and is it any of the naruto characters. will kyuubi make an appearence as one, will he be the evil brother (i can totally see that happening). can't wait til the next update.
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May 9, 2008 at 12:00 AM
This seems to be a really good story, so keep on with the good work and I'll definetly be there reading it! Take care. Hugs