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by redhaze

person inumoon3
schedule September 13, 2012 at 12:00 AM
Please update soon, I really want to finish this story!!! And I can't help but want him to choose Sasuke. But either way please update soon!
schedule March 31, 2012 at 12:00 AM
More Please!!XD
person G
schedule August 12, 2011 at 12:00 AM
Cool story. I've never read a scenario where Naruto has three people who he could plausibly end up with.

I think of all three males, the one I'm most rooting for is Sasuke. As of this moment, he's the least stable candidate, but the reason why I like him best is actually because of that--because in order to prove his worth to Naruto, he's the one who has to do the most growing as a person. I feel like I want him to do well because of how far he has to come. It would be different if Sasuke weren't making progress (I wouldn't want Naruto with an entitled jerk), but he is. He's finally realized that he could lose Naruto, he's listening to Sakura, he's telling Naruto the things Naruto needs to hear (and not because he's being manipulative, but because he means them). Sasuke still has a ways to go, no way is he perfect, but I'd like to see him continue to grow, to become the person Naruto always wanted him to be--and for Naruto to be rewarded with that person.

Gaara is a nice guy, but between the three guys, his part has been the smallest. He hasn't had as much screen time as Sai and Sasuke, and he hasn't had to grow as a character in the same way Sasuke has. For that reason, I really feel like the battle in this story is mostly between Sai and Sasuke. For Sai...it's hard to explain because I think his kindness and gentleness are wonderful, as is the fact that he's proving himself to be a better boyfriend candidate than anyone might have given him credit for, but I don't know... I guess I feel like there's more deep friendship between Sai and Naruto than there is love and passion.

Can't wait to see who Naruto chooses in the end.
person Ayana
schedule March 21, 2011 at 12:00 AM
Lovely, this story is really well written and so much drama. You made Mpreg valid and I love it. ^-^ keep going
person inumoon3
schedule August 7, 2010 at 12:00 AM
YAY!
An update!
Although I'm a year late, it was still good to read!
Can't wait for the next one!!!
schedule March 2, 2010 at 12:00 AM
Update sooon please I wouldn't know which one I would choose yeah I do lol all of them but call me greedy hehehe lol so heck let naruto have them all thats what I say. Just work it out you know you can lol.......
person Athlum
schedule December 8, 2009 at 12:00 AM
This is great I'm loving it so much. I can't wait to see which one he'll pick. Right now I'm leaning towards Sai, he's just so cute. But either of them is fine I'm not picky or multiples works to. Also I hope the baby is a boy because all of the mpreg stories I've read have them having either twins boy/girl or just a girl. Plus I think a boy is cuter in my opinion anyway. Okay I'll stop now hope you update soon.
person inumoon3
schedule September 25, 2009 at 12:00 AM
Please update!
I want to know what happens next!
Or even who he chooses!
person blasterblurby
schedule August 11, 2009 at 12:00 AM
I Need More More More More More More More More More More More! I'm a addicted! I need more posesive sasuke, more well-endowed Sai, more uber-awesome gaara, and more preggy Naruto!!! Pretty Plz?! ^.^
person inumoon3
schedule August 5, 2009 at 12:00 AM
WONDERFUL CHAPTER!!!!
I really want Sasuke to be the father and the one he chooses.
But I feel Gaara and Naruto should be close to getting together, until he realizes his burning love for Sasuke.
I think Naru and Sai are better off as friends, and I hope he gains another best friend out of this.