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July 10, 2009 at 12:00 AM
Great story, but I have the feeling that, no matter how thi story ends I'll feel sad. If Naruto chooses Sai the other two will end up alone, the same applying to Gaara and Sasuke. AND I LIKE ALL THREE OF THEM!!! Yeah, Sasuke is his usual bastard-y self, but really, he wouldn't be Sasuke if he acted any different, his bhaviour is one of the reasons why Naruto feels drawn to him in the first place, he always offers a challenge.
Although I admit that he's probably the dumbest genius, like, ever.
And pooor Naruto, I think he just invented speed-dating, having three suitors at the same time. ;)
Although I admit that he's probably the dumbest genius, like, ever.
And pooor Naruto, I think he just invented speed-dating, having three suitors at the same time. ;)
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July 4, 2009 at 12:00 AM
I just located your story and had a complete of thoughts to share.
1. I am enjoying the story so far.
2. I think that you are making Naurto a little too emotional for my tastes but your the author.
3. PLEASE, PLEASE do not allow Naruto to end up with Sasuke, you are writting sasuke as an arrogant ass and I don't like stories that have Naruto paired up with an arrogant ass like Sasuke.
4. I think that Gaara, Sai or even a darkhorse Neji or Shino would be a nice match for Naruto.
Looking forward to more chapters.
1. I am enjoying the story so far.
2. I think that you are making Naurto a little too emotional for my tastes but your the author.
3. PLEASE, PLEASE do not allow Naruto to end up with Sasuke, you are writting sasuke as an arrogant ass and I don't like stories that have Naruto paired up with an arrogant ass like Sasuke.
4. I think that Gaara, Sai or even a darkhorse Neji or Shino would be a nice match for Naruto.
Looking forward to more chapters.
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June 30, 2009 at 12:00 AM
Great story, I am kinda hoping that Naruto is pregnant with Triplets, one for each of the fathers, Foxes do have more than one kit as well and when cats go into heat the litter of kittens can belong to multiple fathers so it could work and to read about the expressions of everyone involve, lol, priceless. Well keep up the great work.
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June 30, 2009 at 12:00 AM
Review Ch.9
Sexual connection is a good thing to have but that can't be the only thing. If someone only cares about what they want and cares so little about the others wants and needs, then that's a problem. Sai has shown he cares more about Naruto than he does about himself, Sasuke has shown that he feels the opposite. Being Dominated isn't able someone controlling you so they can get what they want, it's about someone showing that they care. I don't think Sasuke gets that. Gaara seems like the dominant, but caring sort. Maybe he can express that alternate view. Though I must admit I'm leaning towards Sai in this.
One interesting conclusion would be if Sasuke were the father of the baby, but Naruto chooses someone else. Sasuke and others keep going on about how they're connected and how they're destined to remain connected and it would interesting if that connection would be through a shared child and nothing more. No romantic connection like so many assume. And I would just love to see a non-SasuNaru story. We'd started to move away from them slightly, started to see a few more of the non variety but from what I've seen SasuNaru has started to come on stronger to be almost the entirety of the stories written.
Sexual connection is a good thing to have but that can't be the only thing. If someone only cares about what they want and cares so little about the others wants and needs, then that's a problem. Sai has shown he cares more about Naruto than he does about himself, Sasuke has shown that he feels the opposite. Being Dominated isn't able someone controlling you so they can get what they want, it's about someone showing that they care. I don't think Sasuke gets that. Gaara seems like the dominant, but caring sort. Maybe he can express that alternate view. Though I must admit I'm leaning towards Sai in this.
One interesting conclusion would be if Sasuke were the father of the baby, but Naruto chooses someone else. Sasuke and others keep going on about how they're connected and how they're destined to remain connected and it would interesting if that connection would be through a shared child and nothing more. No romantic connection like so many assume. And I would just love to see a non-SasuNaru story. We'd started to move away from them slightly, started to see a few more of the non variety but from what I've seen SasuNaru has started to come on stronger to be almost the entirety of the stories written.
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June 30, 2009 at 12:00 AM
Review ch. 10
Yeah, I think so far Gaara's proving himself to be a relatively happy medium between Sai and Sasuke. I'm still kind of rooting for Sai, but Gaara's coming up there for me. I'm still completely anti-Sasuke. Mainly because he's being an ass and a pig and just all kinds of bad things and because I really want to see a non-SasuNaru story in the sea of SasuNaru stories. I really do think it would be interesting to have Sasuke be the father but Naruto select one of the other two guys to be with. It would be complicated, though, in that case if it was Gaara Naruto selected. Because Gaara has to be kazekage, unless he decides to move to Konoha to be with Naruto and give up his position. But otherwise, Naruto would have to move to Suna, giving up his dream of being Hokage (unless there's compromise where Naruto lives with Gaara while he's Kazekage and when Tsunade's ready to retire and pass the seat on, he gives up his position and lets Naruto go and become Hokage), and then it would be complicated with a child involved. I doubt Sasuke would want his child living in a separate location but then neither would Naruto. And the baby can't go back and forth... That would be quite complicated, which would make Sai a better choice.
And if I can put in a request about the baby, could that baby maybe be a boy. And just 1 boy (I'm getting a little tired of boy/girl twins, those just feel like copouts where the author didn't want to make a choice and so just decided on one of each. And I'm getting a bit tired of extreme multiples. Because in the other set of stories, authors seem to be aiming for as many kids as they can humanly stuff into their 'mother'). I'm finding that I'm not often finding stories with boys being born. Fanfic authors seem to be on a little girl kick and for someone who doesn't especially like little girls and how stories change when girls are born (and who finds little boys to be utterly adorable in a way that girls just aren't), this isn't a very happy trend. So I'm putting out requests when I can for little boys. I might be jinxing myself because it seems that most of the time when I put this request in, the story's seem to be abandoned, but I'm hoping that won't happen in this case.
Anyways, that was a long review so I'm just going to end it now. Can't wait for your next update and here's hoping for a boy (and only 1 baby) *crosses fingers*
Yeah, I think so far Gaara's proving himself to be a relatively happy medium between Sai and Sasuke. I'm still kind of rooting for Sai, but Gaara's coming up there for me. I'm still completely anti-Sasuke. Mainly because he's being an ass and a pig and just all kinds of bad things and because I really want to see a non-SasuNaru story in the sea of SasuNaru stories. I really do think it would be interesting to have Sasuke be the father but Naruto select one of the other two guys to be with. It would be complicated, though, in that case if it was Gaara Naruto selected. Because Gaara has to be kazekage, unless he decides to move to Konoha to be with Naruto and give up his position. But otherwise, Naruto would have to move to Suna, giving up his dream of being Hokage (unless there's compromise where Naruto lives with Gaara while he's Kazekage and when Tsunade's ready to retire and pass the seat on, he gives up his position and lets Naruto go and become Hokage), and then it would be complicated with a child involved. I doubt Sasuke would want his child living in a separate location but then neither would Naruto. And the baby can't go back and forth... That would be quite complicated, which would make Sai a better choice.
And if I can put in a request about the baby, could that baby maybe be a boy. And just 1 boy (I'm getting a little tired of boy/girl twins, those just feel like copouts where the author didn't want to make a choice and so just decided on one of each. And I'm getting a bit tired of extreme multiples. Because in the other set of stories, authors seem to be aiming for as many kids as they can humanly stuff into their 'mother'). I'm finding that I'm not often finding stories with boys being born. Fanfic authors seem to be on a little girl kick and for someone who doesn't especially like little girls and how stories change when girls are born (and who finds little boys to be utterly adorable in a way that girls just aren't), this isn't a very happy trend. So I'm putting out requests when I can for little boys. I might be jinxing myself because it seems that most of the time when I put this request in, the story's seem to be abandoned, but I'm hoping that won't happen in this case.
Anyways, that was a long review so I'm just going to end it now. Can't wait for your next update and here's hoping for a boy (and only 1 baby) *crosses fingers*
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June 30, 2009 at 12:00 AM
SO CUTE!!!!! Personally I want Gaara to be the father and not that jerk Sasuke. Don't get me wrong I love naruto/sasuke fanfics but in this one hes being a bastard with a stick the size of mt.fugi up his ass! Sai is ok but I can't see him as the father since Gaara was first. Can't wait for a new chapter!!!!
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June 19, 2009 at 12:00 AM
Ha! Take that Sasuke! Great chapter, I enjoyed reading this story so far. I like Sasuke, but sometimes I really really REALLY wish someone wold come up and strangle the prissy bitch for his houlier-than-thou attitude. Great chapter, more please :)
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October 12, 2008 at 12:00 AM
This is a really good story, and I really, really want to see what happens next, so can you update soon? PPPPPPPPPPPPPPPPPLLLLLLLLLLLLLLLLLLLLEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAASSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEE!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
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August 23, 2008 at 12:00 AM
LOVE
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August 18, 2008 at 12:00 AM
I freaking love this fic!
Sasuke probably deserved a slap or two.
But I still want Naruto and Sasuke to end up together...although Sai and Naruto is looking tempting...
Sasuke probably deserved a slap or two.
But I still want Naruto and Sasuke to end up together...although Sai and Naruto is looking tempting...