rate_review Reviews

Your characterzations are wonderful and you are doing a great job keeping the tension alive for us poor viewers! "who will he pick?!" Personally, I'd love it if all four of them got together to share house. I could just see all those alphas butting heads...hehe. Seriously though Naruto needs that much man just to keep up with him and his energy (and I don't just mean the heat). After all it would be a great way for Naruto to spite Kyu and his foxy instincts. But in the end if you feel you have to give him just one mate I'm voting for Sauske, I'm a Naru/Sasu whore.

Can't they all end up with Naruto?! ^.^ Yeah right...*sigh* it would be lovely....nice chapter...I love Sasuke as a prick...he's just so Sasuke. And Sai is sweet...he really thinks he heas no chance with Naruto huh? :( And where is Gaara in all this!? I can't wait to see how THAT meeting will go! thanks for updating!

You updated cool. I really like this story.

SAI tied with sasuke??! madness! what is this world coming to? *shakes head* lol i thought for sure we really only had to watch out for gaara ha! clearly i was hella wrong.

sasuke teme WHAT are you doing??!! HOW is this your brilliant plan to get naruto?! you're gonna let sai win!.. err i mean capture naruto's heart.. lol :D *pouts* sasuke seemed so much sweeter in 'his' chapter tho. maybe this is his reaction to feeling threatened by 2 other stray dudes muscling in on what he thought he had on lock. but damn you sasuke, this approach is not gonna work, he'll only resent you! gah. stupid sai, friggin let me draw you.. smooth, real smooth hahahaha

looking forward to the next chapter. umm boo sai. boo gaara. yay sasuke! :D

I love how Sasuke approached Naru-chan! I think Naru's going to realize that Sasuke is his one and only love!!!! Can't wait to read more soon, I really hope Sasuke is the father and gets to be with Naru in the end!!!

i love the story i just think it should be a sainaru fic because there is not that many of those kind of pairing.

The voices in my head want to vote too, so that about 1500 votes for GAARA!

It should be Sai. Not that I'm necessarily voting for Naruto to end up with him, cause, out of the lot of them, I'll pick Gaara every time, but to just be there when Naruto gets out... I think it should be Sai. Sai doesn't understand emotions even less than Naruto. They make for a good awkward first conversation together.


Although, in all likely hood, I will be outvoted and it will end up being Sasuke. Sasuke's just that obsessive that he would be lurking around (all nonchalant, of course) and waiting for the first opportunity to confront Naruto and stake his claim. (Much to self-assured for Naruto's liking... leading to a delightful fight!) But then again, what do I know. >) hehehe


Keep up the good work!

MUHAHAHAHAAH............nice!!! i am very curious as to how they are gonna get his love!!!

if anything tsunde gets to be a grandma to the kid(s?)!!!!!

love it!!

LOL!!! Okay, okay, I just have to say now that I'm a big fan of this story. Sure, it's a little formulaic and all, but in a good way. And you said you are not confident about your sex scene writing skills, so I wanted to let you know I really enjoyed them. They were hot! Haha, sex is supposed to be the best part of fanfics, but I sadly have to skim the lemons in some stories because they're so unoriginal and cheesy. That said, I actually really liked your sex scenes. Naruto was needy and slutty without being annoying or too feminine. Not too many authoresses can pull that off; you should be proud! ♥ (I particularly loved his clenching ****, just begging to be filled! harder! faster! more! LOL such a wonderfully sexy, needy cock glutton. He needs three men just to keept up with him!) And yes!! I was like, "wer b teh sexxx, hor?!?" in the last chapter, because I wanted moar. LOL.

I like how Naruto was back to his normal, easily embarrassed yet brash self after the heat wore off. That made the slutty bottom whore Naruto of previous chapters even cuter. Also, I greatly enjoy seeing Naruto get his harem. XD Even so, I have a soft spot for Sasuke and would like to mention how pleased I was that Sasuke was the only one man enough to satiate Naruto, i.e. fuck him into unconsciousness. Ha! Oh, and any chance Neji will have an interest in Naruto? I don't care either way, and it would be odd to add him after the whole heat ordeal, but I just wondered since Neji is totally canonically one of Naruto's seme admirers. :3 Keep up the good work and please update as soon as you can!

~Kang