rate_review Reviews

This was a fantastic story, and you tell it so wonderfully. I'm glad that you picked Shino to write about. He is my most favorite of the Naruto anime and also the least written bout. I think that's what makes the story so special to me. Thank you for taking the time to write for us fans. I hope to be reading more of your stories in the future.

I just read the latest chapter of your other story, and saw that I had last reviewed it a month ago. I think I must have read what existed of that one and then continued on to read this one, and that was a month or so ago. So, I wandered over here to see what your other story had been. Now here's the amazing part:

All I had to read was maybe a couple inches down and the whole thing came back. I also remembered how full of awesome this story was, and I figure you definitely should have gotten a review from me. I remember Shino being quite the hunk in this one, which was new. It's a different approach to his character from what I have seen in the past, and an intriguing one at that. I really liked it. And the whole jewel thing almost reminded me of the special and cool stuff that sometimes shows up in the Naruto movies, with weird crystals and stuff. So, it totally makes sense that this is the narutoverse, and your OC could totally be the heroine of a Naruto movie, as long as "Naruto" was temporarily renamed "Shino". Haha! Joke. Ok.

Anyway, there were a lot of interesting concepts, with the bugs, and the whole "kidnapped at birth" thing, and the running away and impersonating a slightly daft person, and... I could go on. But this story was definitely choc-full of awesome.

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Oh dear oh dear, yet another greatly written story, I'm so embarassed I've not read this before but that's fixed now!
I absolutely fell in love with Shino thanks to you and this fanfic... I'm just all depressed that the story ended where it did, I could have read dozens of more chapters!
Both this and Hatsu (so far) have been such a huge delight to read, can't wait for more Hatsu, and hopefully more Naruto-fics! -^.^-

I am sorry that I have forgone reviewing your stories. But I have to say, I have followed your two stories since the very first chapters. And to finally see the end of this story was such a happy moment for me. Shino is my alltime favorite character, and I couldn't be more pleased with the way that you have written him.

And Tasha is a very well rounded character as well. She has an endearing quality about her, and that is the type of girl I could see Shino with.

I am writing a story with an OC and Shino as well, and I know it is hard to find recognition for your works, simply because you add an OC. So I want you to know, you have one fan who understands and loves your stories and your characters. Please continue writing, and I can't wait until you finnish your Gaara/Matsuri story.

Keep up the amazing work. I'm rooting for you!

Dear, you posted the wrong chapter for number 8. You accidentally put up a chapter for Hatsu. Just letting you know. Put the new chap up soon!

Your story is excellently written. I hope you continue creating such beautiful masterpieces in the future.

Please update soon. I really like your story and would like to see where you go with it ^_^

Ohhh her papa's gonna be MAD!! But things will work out for her...I hope. Hmm was that a Hyuuga who said his eyes don't lie? Hmm guess I just have to wait and see.

I for one LOVE this story. Her dads such an ass and her sensei and teammates are bitches!! I hope she finds love soon. And yeah she totally needs to leave her old village, there's nothing there for her except ridicule and pain....ok well update soon Ja ne =^_^=

P.S I call dibs on Neji!! LMAO XD *tackles Neji*

Once again great job! I sooo wanna kill her sensei! *grabs a kunai* Well hope you keep up the great work... now if you'll excuse me I have to go find that bastard sensei *insert evil laugh* Ja ne =^_^=