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for Hatsu

by dragonslover1

schedule July 23, 2014 at 12:00 AM
I really liked your story! It's so heated and sexy! Keep up the great work!
person Gemini
schedule May 18, 2014 at 12:00 AM
I am LOVING this fic so far! Suzaki is awesome, totally believable. I can really relate to her, the way she thinks and feels and talks. I find myself rooting for her all the time, and it makes me smile. I can't wait to see more of this fic, and find out what happens. Thank you for writing it!
~Gemini
schedule June 1, 2011 at 12:00 AM
This story is truly amazing. It is so well written. Every sentence you read makes you want to read more. It'll be a long, long time before I read another fanfic that is close to being as great as this one. I really commend you on your skill. I love it!
person lo
schedule June 15, 2010 at 12:00 AM
Sock puppets for all!!!!
schedule May 23, 2010 at 12:00 AM
This story is deliciously amazing. The buildup to their realizations and actions, and the still-smooth momentum of the story is just breathtaking. I feel like I just read the whole thing just now, even though I only read this latest chapter. It all came rushing back, and there was just enough allusion to past events to integrate everything perfectly. It's like an amazing souffle that never collapses. That's how good this is. You've got to have some sort of otherworldly inspiration, or something. And I can't remember if I commented about this before, but YOUR OC IS EXCEPTIONAL.
schedule April 27, 2010 at 12:00 AM
This is glorious. And likely. Awesome. And now I go to check out your other story.

klv
schedule April 5, 2010 at 12:00 AM
(The comment above as JELIZAVETA was me, forgetting I've got an account on this site (A) )

WOW. What a chapter! You do not disappoint me at all with this story, it only gets more and more delicious with every chapter you write. ;)
Keep up the gorgeous work, can't wait to see how the next chapter turns out!
schedule April 5, 2010 at 12:00 AM
*tackles* Yea! I was waiting for this chapter...only to find, it was a cliffie...sort of...*goes off and cries*

Btw, I really like your descriptive writing style. Keep up the good work!

person Jelizaveta
schedule April 2, 2010 at 12:00 AM
You have got to carry on writing this! You can't leave it to this point and not continue, it's torture! :D
Gaara. Ahh. What can I say? I always knew I had a thing for him but this fanfic only feeds the flame!
Please, for the sake of my sanity, carry on! <3____<3
person savvy
schedule November 18, 2009 at 12:00 AM
O_O
awesome.....please keep writing!!!! i can't wait for the finish!!!