rate_review Reviews

Thank you! I am in the middle of reading and enjoying "Mine". While I do enjoy the drama, part of me is screaming 'just have a 3 some already!!!'. This gave me that wonderful cool down to continue.

"Naruto grunted as he began to rub his erection between the crevice of her butt cheeks. Sakura squeezed them together for good measure, smirking as she heard Naruto gasp in surprise, followed not long after by a surprised gasp from Sasuke."

Ahaha, it took me a second to get that.

Ah those three are hust so great together. And I think you wrote it very cleverly. *wink*

finally!! i'm always looking for narusakusasu stories! and this one gathers everything that i like! yeeees.

great story, great writing, please write more

I liked it a lot! It definitely helped cheer me up after that last bummer of a chapter from Mine. The only thing--I actually laughed at how silly it seemed for the three of them to call out each others' names in a row. Twice. XD But--very nice sex scene, and pretty good grammar. You repeatedly used forms of the verb "lay" when you should have used forms of the word "lie" (yes, they are discrete verbs; if you don't believe me look them up in the dictionary.), but otherwise no glaring mistakes. I don't think I noticed any typos, so great job on that front, too. You have quite the variation of stories, I'm seeing. I think I will go check out your fic you mention called The Agreement. I'm curious to see what it's about.

Awesome!!


This story was perfect. I loved it. =^^=

That was awsome. writing was goot length was great. At the beginning though it sounded like a multi chapter story. Do you plan to continue?