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August 1, 2008 at 12:00 AM
Cool story.
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May 25, 2008 at 12:00 AM
That was an awesome fic! Everyone was really well characterized, and your writing style definitely has merit. I hope you keep it up, because this was really something.
Kunai and kisses, Dina-chan
Kunai and kisses, Dina-chan
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May 20, 2008 at 12:00 AM
Aww I love it. I'm hoping and praying that you'll write some more in this series of fics. ^_^
That was lovely, Determination was really great too, so I would have reviewed it too, but I'll be late for work if this takes too long. I loved your characterization and the touches of political intrigue. The three remaining Elders in your fic scare me I don't mind telling you that I want Kakashi to rip their throats out for me. ^_^
Great job, and keep up the great work! ^_^
That was lovely, Determination was really great too, so I would have reviewed it too, but I'll be late for work if this takes too long. I loved your characterization and the touches of political intrigue. The three remaining Elders in your fic scare me I don't mind telling you that I want Kakashi to rip their throats out for me. ^_^
Great job, and keep up the great work! ^_^
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May 17, 2008 at 12:00 AM
Nicely written. That was a very moving piece.
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May 16, 2008 at 12:00 AM
Really this is just a oneshot?! It would've made a good multichapter. Especially if there were some NaruSasu-y goodness mixed in.... Mmmmmm =3 It was really good either way!!
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May 16, 2008 at 12:00 AM
Ooh sequel! I didn't see that before! YATTA!!!
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May 16, 2008 at 12:00 AM
I'll be short and sweet...you are a brilliant storyteller and I'm insanely jealous I didn't write something as great as this. ^-^