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for Determination

by SangreFria

person lo
schedule May 17, 2008 at 12:00 AM
You, my dear are a wonderful writer. This is a real story. I love what you are creating and how you are developing your characters. I can't wait to see more of your work. This is the kind of writing more people on this site should strive for. Great work.
schedule May 17, 2008 at 12:00 AM
I'll be watching for the next installment like a hawk! Your writing style is very good, and the story line is captivating ^-^
person Halskr
schedule May 16, 2008 at 12:00 AM
I have to say I like both of your stories; hopefully, they will be continued. It would be helpful to condense them into a multichapter fic, but I don't know how to do that. The plot and intrigue is very good, and it will definately bring me back for more. Poor Tsunade, I really hope you write more about her and her passing. That part was so sad. There are just so many ways that you can go with this story. It really is a nice concept. The interactions between Naruto and Sasuke are well thought out, and a bit different from the way they are usually portrayed which is a really nice change. I think you are managing to keep both of them in character very well, yet still allow a relationship between them to be possible. Thanks for writing and sharing this.
person rosie
schedule May 16, 2008 at 12:00 AM
Promising story. I love it and wait for the sequel! Thank you!
person dragonlady sakura
schedule May 16, 2008 at 12:00 AM
OMG! This story is so riveting. I'm completely hooked already. First, let me just say you are one hell of a writer and this plot is as good as any best seller I've read in the stores. Love, love, loved it!!!