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July 23, 2008 at 12:00 AM
OMFG!!!! That had to be one of the hottest lemons I've read so far! You have soooo made my day ^_^ I had a miserable night because of a tooth-ache but reading this made me feel a whole lot better. Now I can go to the dentist with visions of Neji and Shika going at it ^_^ Oh, and the scene where Shika sneaks into his parents bedroom to steal a condom...hilarious *rofl* I love this story and I can't wait to read the next chapter!
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July 21, 2008 at 12:00 AM
That was damned hot!!! And it wasn't a dream like i (and shika) had presumed!!!! Just...damn...sexy as hell! Wonderful lemon! Great fic! Delicious plot! Excellent writer ^_^!
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July 20, 2008 at 12:00 AM
it took me a while to get back with this fic after trying to read it when it was in the shika/neji section, but i'm glad i got back with it^^
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July 20, 2008 at 12:00 AM
Keep up the great work. It's usual in a Neji x Shikamaru pairing for Neji to be demure, but not for Shika to be quietly wathcing and hoping for something (as far as I know). Shikamaru's dad is a great touch, and I love how the relationship is progressing. Oh, and the whole baseball thing isn't done a lot, so it's great! You pay a lot of attention to detail, so great job. One of my favorite stories.
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July 20, 2008 at 12:00 AM
Only one word can decribe the sixth chapter:
Yay.
Shikamaru better accept being the first base position now. x3
Yay.
Shikamaru better accept being the first base position now. x3
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July 20, 2008 at 12:00 AM
So...hot!
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July 19, 2008 at 12:00 AM
Really good chapter!
Heh, I love this side of Neji!
Well, at least now he knows he is gay! xD
It was so cute how Neji wanted Shikamaru to be turned on too. :DD
And the ending was really hot!
Really hot first kiss for Neji. 8D
I wonder if they are gonna do it all the way.
Ah, Shika's dreams came true in one night!
But I wonder... Who's the guy Shikamaru has had sex with?
I hope you keep writing and update soon again!
Really good story and a really hot chapter! And adorable. xD
Heh, I love this side of Neji!
Well, at least now he knows he is gay! xD
It was so cute how Neji wanted Shikamaru to be turned on too. :DD
And the ending was really hot!
Really hot first kiss for Neji. 8D
I wonder if they are gonna do it all the way.
Ah, Shika's dreams came true in one night!
But I wonder... Who's the guy Shikamaru has had sex with?
I hope you keep writing and update soon again!
Really good story and a really hot chapter! And adorable. xD
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July 19, 2008 at 12:00 AM
Really, really, REALLY good chapter!
O love this insecure-but-horny Neji! :DD
And the sex scene was totally hot! Shika even cummed ON Neji!
Just like the teacher in the movie. 8D
Hehehe, poor Shikamaru. His father just HAD to be awake. xD
Well, at least he knows his son uses protection. :D
Totally hot.
And THEN Neji offers another round? Shikamaru must be in heaven!
I hope you keep writing and update soon again!
Really hot, adorable and fun story and chapter!
O love this insecure-but-horny Neji! :DD
And the sex scene was totally hot! Shika even cummed ON Neji!
Just like the teacher in the movie. 8D
Hehehe, poor Shikamaru. His father just HAD to be awake. xD
Well, at least he knows his son uses protection. :D
Totally hot.
And THEN Neji offers another round? Shikamaru must be in heaven!
I hope you keep writing and update soon again!
Really hot, adorable and fun story and chapter!
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July 19, 2008 at 12:00 AM
Holy crap! consummation! thank you thank you thank you thank you thank you!
I'm so happy you found this fic on your hard drive and didn't just delete the damn thing; I am enjoying this so much!
I'm so happy you found this fic on your hard drive and didn't just delete the damn thing; I am enjoying this so much!
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July 19, 2008 at 12:00 AM
I like your stories because they're original, and not the same fandom plots recycled. Great Story.
Oh, and I don't know if your a member or not, but would you consider posting your links over at http://community.livejournal.com/shikanejishika/ ? We'd love to have you!
Oh, and I don't know if your a member or not, but would you consider posting your links over at http://community.livejournal.com/shikanejishika/ ? We'd love to have you!