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for Earth Angel

by PrplGrl

person charmpit
schedule July 12, 2008 at 12:00 AM
I cannot believe you ended the chapter like that!

Why is Shikaku always characterized as the horny incorrigible parent?

I loved this chapter, it was very funny.
person MeLaiya
schedule July 12, 2008 at 12:00 AM
OMG that was so fucking hot. Please keep up the good work and update EXTRA soon.
schedule July 11, 2008 at 12:00 AM
Neji is so innocently cute. I want shika to cuddle him for me ^_^ Shika's dad=funny as hell! I would totally die of embarrassemt had i a parent like that
person Anon
schedule July 11, 2008 at 12:00 AM
Oh...My...God! Arggh, a cliff hanger! Update soon, please! I can't stand the suspense! Does Nara Sr's comments about Shika's endowment mean that he's going to be seme? Please say yes!
schedule July 11, 2008 at 12:00 AM
OMG cliffy?! EVIL

I love this fic, I'm hoping nara is the seme *drools*

PLEASE update soon

xxxxx
person Twiggies
schedule July 10, 2008 at 12:00 AM
Haha.
Maybe Shikamaru needs that condom anyways. xDD
Well, Neji told them himself: baseball is his life!
No wonder he has missed ''The sex talk!'' xD

And Shika's dad was just so hilarious.
Telling embarrassing things about Shika to Neji. xD And his son just happens to be in love with him.
And then the condom thing. xD Thank God Yoshino was out of town!

Ooh, and Yay for the showeeerrs! xD
Shika saved got to see his angel naked and actually saved him too.

Really goos chapter once again!
I hope you keep writing and update soon again!
person Sanee
schedule July 10, 2008 at 12:00 AM
Yum! This newest chapter was great. So worth the wait for you to update it. <3
...Though, may I ask a favor? I'm totally not against asking for reviews and stuff, but would you consider getting rid of the "10 reviews before I update" rule? (I know you don't explicitly state that anywhere, but after noticing a pattern in when/how you update, I figured what I mentioned before was the case.) It would just make me, a faithful reader of this story and the GFM series, really happy if you could post your new chapters as soon as you write them instead of making us fans wait.
Thanks for hearing me out.
person HumanInfiltrator
schedule July 10, 2008 at 12:00 AM
Oh boy. That is just priceless! Thank you, thank you, thank you. Giving his son a condom, priceless. I just wonder what he thought they would be using for lube?
person eriinx
schedule July 10, 2008 at 12:00 AM
I love this story!
Shikaku's such an funny father.
Awkward moment for Shikamaru awaits.
schedule July 9, 2008 at 12:00 AM
Bwahahaha! C'mon, let's see some happy endings here. You've got something of a mixed bag when it comes to happy endings, so here's some encouragement! This goes for the new story you've got up too! Happiness, people! At least get someone to rescue the Quincy, like Ichigo, then he can get Shika out too. Please?