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for Earth Angel

by PrplGrl

person llyoung
schedule May 16, 2008 at 12:00 AM
Loved Shika's daydream in the showers. Hope that you decide to continue this story.
person Twiggies
schedule May 16, 2008 at 12:00 AM
Really good fic!
I really hope you write more!

Gosh, I love Shikamaru and his little ''obsession''.
He even joined the baseball team! xD Of course he didn't know what he agreed to, but still.. xD

And Neji's awesome.
The way you write aout him makes him really look like an angel. xD
(Well, actually he IS, even SHika thinks so)

I hope you keep writing!
person charmpit
schedule May 16, 2008 at 12:00 AM
Oh, come on. Two more chapters? You are just too good at writing NejiShikaNeji, I think I'm becoming addicted.

Besides, shower sex is HOT. Shower sex between Shikamaru and Neji would burn down two brick buildings.
person Sanee
schedule May 16, 2008 at 12:00 AM
Please, if you could only do one thing for me, it would be to update this story. It is so beautiful. I had shivers just from reading it-a true sign of a good story.
Anyway, please cosnider my request. And if you'd like to talk or anything, my email is provided.
-Sanee
person Sanee
schedule May 16, 2008 at 12:00 AM
Sorry about that. I guess AFF hides emails from anonymous reviewers. Anyway, it's sanee.ftw @ gmail.com (remove spaces), if you're interested.
schedule May 16, 2008 at 12:00 AM
Great fic. I am really looking forward to seeing where this is headed. I find Shika's obsession rather charming ^_^