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for Earth Angel

by PrplGrl

schedule October 21, 2008 at 12:00 AM
great new chapter, can't wait to see what you have in store next
schedule October 19, 2008 at 12:00 AM
Please, pretty please continue this *-* PLEEAAAAASEEE!!!!!
schedule October 16, 2008 at 12:00 AM
I was just thinking that I don't review enough on stories I've been reading, because I've already said I love it.

It bears saying again though. I like that you didn't have Neji suddenly decided to be all lovey-dovey, but still, its sad for Shikamaru to be fuck buddy when he really wants a relationship. I'm glad he stuck up for himself at the end though.
person Articfox
schedule October 15, 2008 at 12:00 AM
Nooo my poor Shikamaru!!! And Neji-kun!!! *cries until another chapter comes up*
person eriinx.x
schedule October 14, 2008 at 12:00 AM
I love this story soo much.
Poor Shika. D=
Poor Neji. D=
But Shikamaru does deserve to be seen as more than just sex.
person Twiggies
schedule October 13, 2008 at 12:00 AM
Oh wow. Finally busted!
Neji really had fallen in love with sex, while Shika was in love with him. XDDD
And now they must pay the consequences...
Poor Shika, it wasn't his day. I wonder what's going to happen next.
Neji kind of knows now that to Shika it wasn't just sex so...
I waiting for the next chapter! XD So good.
I hope you keep writing and update soon again!
schedule October 13, 2008 at 12:00 AM
I feel so bad for them! It's so unfair!

My heart is breaking for Shikamaru. He is so in love with his angel!

I am happy to see this new chapter. This story is on my recommended reading list, and I am always checking for updates. I look forward to future updates.
person llyoung
schedule October 13, 2008 at 12:00 AM
Oh, poor Shika (and Neji). I want to beat up Gai and Kakashi.
person tovah
schedule October 13, 2008 at 12:00 AM
Fantastic! I love this story so much. I can't wait to read the next chapter you really left me upset (yet still loving you!)with your cliffhanger.
person qwerty
schedule October 13, 2008 at 12:00 AM
Yeah! Take that Neji! There's more to Shika than just sex... very hott sex nonetheless... but there's more to him!!
About time Shika put his foot down, although it was a little late *sweatdrop*
I was wondering who was that shadowy person at the end of the last chapter! Damn Kakashi, even though he really has no choice as coach.
Great chapter! Keep going!!