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for Earth Angel

by PrplGrl

person LadyWolf
schedule October 13, 2008 at 12:00 AM
Damn that stupid Neji!!!! He is being oblivious just like our beloved blonde!!!

Poor Shika :o(

Post soon!!!
person Sanee
schedule October 13, 2008 at 12:00 AM
Worst cliffhanger ever! But it's still beautiful -cries-. (Oh, and good luck with college and everything. I read your A/N for last chapter.)
person MewMew2
schedule October 13, 2008 at 12:00 AM
Excellent job. You managed to get me interested and now hooked on a paring which I personally have never had any interest whatsoever in. Well done! Please update once more when you have the time.
person I_Luv_Shikamaru
schedule October 13, 2008 at 12:00 AM
oh, i wanted to cry! please update soon!
person Fate-Angel
schedule October 2, 2008 at 12:00 AM
It just keeps getting better.
Keep up the good work!
I can't wait for the next chapter.

Fate-Angel
=^-^=
schedule October 1, 2008 at 12:00 AM
The delicious lemons just keep on rolling in! Absolutely delicious. I feel for Shika though. To have the one you love only physically must be painful. If given the choice, I know that I would do the same thing. You write the emotions beautifully ^_^ Great job
person Kijo
schedule September 28, 2008 at 12:00 AM
Love the story.
person Twiggies
schedule September 28, 2008 at 12:00 AM
Hot!
Really, really hot. xD
Heh, in the showers? The whole time I had a feeling that someone would see them, or hear. xD
Ah, but Shika deserved his.. dessert after saving the team. xD
So Neji's delicious everywhere? I believe that. xD

But poor Shika, at least he gets to enjoy his angel now and then, though without hugs and holding hands.
I hope you keep writing and update soon again!
Awesome fic and hot chapter! xD
person qwerty
schedule September 28, 2008 at 12:00 AM
Hot chapter!
"He hoped what he’d heard was nothing more than a heated argument of some kind and not something that could end up tearing the baseball team apart…." I wonder who that could be...
I love that Cho is on the team now!
Great job! update!
person Anon
schedule August 15, 2008 at 12:00 AM
Wow, that was hot!

What's happened to poor Naruto?