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for Kissing Chibi

by SDRR

schedule July 6, 2008 at 12:00 AM
awww, this is cute and amusing. ^^ I like it.
person hisoka
schedule May 26, 2008 at 12:00 AM
thats cute and scary at the same time, i mean chibi gai...come on but it was worth it
person Onikage
schedule May 24, 2008 at 12:00 AM
LMAO!! That has got to be the best "Why Kakashi wears a mask" explanation I have EVER read!!

KUDOS!!
schedule May 24, 2008 at 12:00 AM
LOL!! What a great reason to start buying masks for a lifetime of concealment ^_^
person Elli
schedule May 24, 2008 at 12:00 AM
Well, this has no plot to speak of. And I must say, the second chapter was disappointingly short. The entire story seems sort of mediocre, and I would expect to find it cute but it leaves me feeling just sort of bleh.

You are one of the few authors on this site that knows what grammar and spelling is though, so I suppose I have to give you some credit. :3 But honestly speaking, I think you can do better.

Keep writing,

-Ella
person despairs
schedule May 17, 2008 at 12:00 AM
Kawaii! That was so cute.
person blueh
schedule May 17, 2008 at 12:00 AM
awww... sounds so sweet and cute... and innocent. :D
schedule May 17, 2008 at 12:00 AM
very cute...=^-^=
person hisoka
schedule May 17, 2008 at 12:00 AM
cute just cute
person SasUke28
schedule May 17, 2008 at 12:00 AM
awww, supah-kawaii! I loved this 'lil fic! It was short, sweet, and to the point of fluff and no return! XD, arigato for writing!Ja ne!

-Pepsi!