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I can't remember if I reviewed this already or not, so I figured I'd leave one for ya. Holy hell, this is hot! I'd never really thought a RaiSasu would work, but the way you presented it was perfect. And so freaking smexy I nearly keeled over! Whew... Anywho, great job as usual. Now I'm off to reread more of your stuff ^_^

Absolutely fantastic! I've read some of your work before but this one is just sublime, definitely one of your best. I love the wealth of details you place in your writing, they truly make the whole thing come alive. The characters are so accurate and your careful portrayal makes them beautifully vivid. Thank you so much. :)

A quite unusual pairing, but one I am now feeling a great affection for. Any chance of you writing more for this in the future?

that´s hot =D ... Maybe sequel ??? - puppy dog´s eyes -

Feedback? you want feedback? How about this: the story is glorious. And all the more so since you've actually made it into a superbly well written STORY... and not just a porn sequence. You give delightful backstory with just a few well chosen, well situated lines. Raidou as the rock that keep Genma whole enough for Kakashi, Raidou's experimenting with another guy, the end of Genma's worries that he might be hurting Raidou... in just a few line, you make your reader's imagination spiral off for a quick detour through what those scenes might have been like.

I do have a continuity issue. It stands to reason that this story follows on from The Lucky Ones as far as Sasuke and Kakashi are concerned. When exactly do Raidou and Genma get together though? Very early on, Sasuke reflects that Raidou is interested in girls and, in the beginning of Lucky Ones, it's fairly clear that Kakshi and Genma are involved in their own way. However, it doesn't seem as though Raidou is involved ith Genma further than being his friend and roommate. So is their relationship in Maybe that recent (I'm guesstimating four or five years on from Lucky Ones based on Sasuke's age)? And does the beginning of their time together coincide with Roomates and its sequels? (Sorry for being a pest, but as a rabid fan of your stories, I like to piece them together and imagine hidden interludes- who wouldn' with the characters involved?)

However, the truest sign of your genius and the greatest compliment I could give you concerning this story is to celebrate you evil and sadistic tendencies towards your readers. Do you honestly think there is any rest for us overimaginative suckers who are now condemned to the inevitable constant wondering of what just exactly happens when Genma and Kakashi get home??? Sure, there'll be Genma and Raidou on one side and Sasuke and Kakashi on the other, each couple happy to be back together (and mabe there'll be a new honeymoon period for the both of them), but thoughts need no coercion to then start pondering whether Sasuke might want to see what Genma does so well, either visually or participatively, or, now that everyone 'knows' each other, (and this is where you're truly evil) ... will there ever be an evening (doubtlessly planned by Genma and Kakshi) where EVERYONE tries out that old couch before it needs to be replaced...

Evil.

True evil.

And I love you for it!

Wow. That was SO HOT. Going in, I didn't think I would enjoy this as much as KakaSasu, but I was pleasantly proven wrong. Mmm, Sasuke thoroughly debauched. For some reason while reading, I half expected Kakashi to somehow play voyeur during all of it! XD Guess Perv!Kakashi is stuck on my brain.

Just very very nice. You're ukeSasuke stories are just awesome.

Awesome story! ^^ I wonder what Genma/Sasuke would be like. I bet he'd tease Sasuke to death. XD

I think that might have been some of the hottest smut I've read in a long time! It's always nice to see Sasuke paired up with someone different or in a pairing that doesn't get written much (i love iru/sas myself) and Raidou is one of my favourite guys :) I liked that we got to know what Sasuke saw in Raidou and why it was that he was attracted to him, it made it easy to understand why Sasuke would seek him out and Raidou's little insecurities about what Sasuke saw in him was a wonderful look at what Raidou was thinking. I can't help but wish I could see the conversation between Genma and Raidou when he gets back, I bet Genma would want every little detail especially since it's Sasuke and who hasn't lusted over him ;) Actually the whole thing was just fabulous and I loved reading it, I can't wait to see more of your stuff! ^_^

OMFG! *humps you* this was soooo good. loved it! you have the most amazing writing style. a way of pulling my mind so perfectly down into your words, making them almost touchable. I loved Sasukes and Raidous inteactions. how they fitted eachother so perfectly. you made the whole thing seem so logicall. like "yeah.. off course they should fuck.hellooooo!" hm.. *goes to do dirty things* XD XD

good~

oohh~ i love your storys

greetings from germany ^^