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January 12, 2009 at 12:00 AM
I really enjoy this stoiry and wish you will keep up the work.
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January 11, 2009 at 12:00 AM
Whoa... This is AWESOME!! Keep it up, my friend!
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January 11, 2009 at 12:00 AM
Oh, MAN!! This is gonna be good!!!
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November 5, 2008 at 12:00 AM
This has been a fairly interesting read. The Naruto characters acted more like real world people, and had more real world conflicts. So it was kinda kool seeing that. You made Hinata and Naruto's relationship spiked with problems and insecruities, and that sort of added to the realism which fit nicely with the tone set by the rest of the story. Also, having Naruto converse with the Nine-Tails was quite different, it didn't seem evil like it's often portrayed. He was more along the lines of obnoxious, which made for some pretty funny convos between the two, cause Naruto himself is pretty obnoxious. XD; All in all, it's pretty a damn good story. DIFFERENT, but ver' good. I'll have to read your other stories when I get the chance. Keep writin' them fics! Peace. ^ ~
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October 21, 2008 at 12:00 AM
yay, I'm view #8000! congratulations!
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October 20, 2008 at 12:00 AM
Hey,
pretty awesome story u have going there, hope Ur gunna keep rollin it cos even tho it began as ur first fanfic, i think its ur best.
ur character set ups are pretty guud i dont mind ino and sakura
i wished u hadnt made kiba seem like such an arse
also do have a pattern? like weekly? or do u just add chapters wenever?
keep it up?
l8r
pretty awesome story u have going there, hope Ur gunna keep rollin it cos even tho it began as ur first fanfic, i think its ur best.
ur character set ups are pretty guud i dont mind ino and sakura
i wished u hadnt made kiba seem like such an arse
also do have a pattern? like weekly? or do u just add chapters wenever?
keep it up?
l8r
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October 20, 2008 at 12:00 AM
Great story so far. It is great.
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October 20, 2008 at 12:00 AM
Yo, I agree wit 'Mick' on two points
1. ur story is the best of all naruhina 1's that i've read = congrats
2. I also think that maybe u could give kiba a good part in ur story. i don't kno, he could do sumthing defensive for naruto and hinata, like help keep hiashi away or sumthin. atleast don't leave standin out as a prick.
apart from that i hope u keep writin on it...
1. ur story is the best of all naruhina 1's that i've read = congrats
2. I also think that maybe u could give kiba a good part in ur story. i don't kno, he could do sumthing defensive for naruto and hinata, like help keep hiashi away or sumthin. atleast don't leave standin out as a prick.
apart from that i hope u keep writin on it...
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October 20, 2008 at 12:00 AM
I think by now it would be pretty obvious as to why Kiba is like that.... HE'S A FUCKING ASSHOLE! all he ever does is treat Naruto like shit especially in front of her, and for what? right, to get into Hinata's pants, he doesn't care like Naruto would, he's just a perverted dumb mutt should should have been put down a long time ago.
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October 19, 2008 at 12:00 AM
sweet chapters :)
keep up the excellent work i can't wait to read more.
keep up the excellent work i can't wait to read more.