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Dun Dun Duuunnnnnnnnn! man, I love some good epic level suspense!

Hahahahahahhaha... his desperation to find out who his parents were all comes down to a simple birth certificate. ^^ Hell, if Hidden Leaf keeps birth certificates like any other bureaucratic institution, Naruto probably could have filed for a copy of it on his own ages ago. =^^= hehehehe

Great chapter! Hinata is finally free!
Keep up the good work!

Excellent! Well worth waiting for. I await your next chapter with barley controlled enthusiasm. Will it be up SOON!

No offense taken. I pulled the last two reviews because there is no need to argue. There are reasons my writing has slowed down. As I've stated before in previous author's notes; I do work a full-time job and have a family. I try to get chapters out in a timely manner, but sometimes it just doesn't happen. I rushed a chaper of another fic and it was really bad. In fact it was so bad I had to rewrite the entire chapter. I don't want to do that again. So please, I beg of you, have a little more patience, ne? I try to make it worth the wait. ^_^

Smooches
~Ani

Hiashi is causing trouble! Naruto needs to calm down before the threats he makes in relation to protecting Hinata from her clan spoil the delicate balance of trust he has with the village! O_O

Keep up the great work!

Man, always feels better to read good literature twice. keep writing my dear, or I'm afraid I will have to blast you with a lot of fire Jutsu. ^_^

oh god please tell me there is going to me more...

Yatta, a new chapter! oh I am so glad you decided to update. I wonder what Hiashi (spelling!!) wants, I mean he cannot be dumb enough to try and attack either naruto or Hinata, he`d be ripped apart. And we still have not heard Hinat`s answer to the marriage proposal (even though everybody knows it will be a "yes") Wonderful chapter, though Naruto should really know who his farther is. Update soon.

Awww... this chapter made me gush with girly thoughts. Yay for love. Yay for Hinata. Yay for insecure Narutos (well, maybe not 'yay' persay, but I always enjoy reading about internal insecurities.) hehe

Keep up the great work. ^^

I am so sorry for not reviewing the previous chapters, but i somehow forgot ot check up on your story, can you belive that`? I am really sorry. The past two chapters were extremely interesting, seeing as we learnt more about the past of both Hinata and Naruto. Wirh all these hints dropped now by Naruto`s surrounding, he should slowly start realizing who his father was, though I suppose that is how Naruto is. Also quite contrary to tradition, Hinata more or less proposed to Naruto and I have a feeling that the reason why Hinata was pulled of the mission is because she is pregnant with Naruto`s child. what was in the letter? Oh yeah, nice move letting Sakura and Ino have a lesbian relationship, yumm. sizzling hot images flash through my (admittedly perverted) brain. Please update soon, I am waiting for further excitiong chapters.