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June 8, 2008 at 12:00 AM
Damn, I don`t know what to say, This story started of a bit strange but has now got nicely under way and is really quite interesting. I´ve noticed that you like kyuubi quite a lot and the way you display him is very nice. . I wonder when Hinata and Naruto will understand that Naruto is the Yondaime`s son. Then there is the problem of why Hinata left her home. All in all I think there are more than enough reasons to update this story as soon as (in)humanly possible. Please. (But don`t forget the second part of wind and Fire!!)
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June 6, 2008 at 12:00 AM
Sweet fic, the limon was confusing, I had to reread it because I didn't see where He entered her, all in all, it was good update soon.
Primus2021
Primus2021
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May 20, 2008 at 12:00 AM
you should continue there is so much more you can do with this story
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May 18, 2008 at 12:00 AM
Where in the cannon does this fall? Does Hinata know that Naruto has the nine tails within him? Kyuubi is pretty chatty within this too. I wonder if it has anything to do with the fact that Naruto can't sleep. Hmm...
Anyway. This is a good story. Highly enjoyable. Keep up the good work. ^^
Anyway. This is a good story. Highly enjoyable. Keep up the good work. ^^
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May 17, 2008 at 12:00 AM
just wated to point out it is "the valley of the end" not the final valley. the final valley is easier for the story though doesn't take as long to type.