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December 8, 2008 at 12:00 AM
wow! those two sure know how to put up a nasty fight!
i love it when they always end up fucking eachothers brains out after arguing, lol
god please update sooner, can't wait till they hook up for real, and when Sasuke was behind that curtain, haha pricless, i wish i could've seen the look on his face, oh and Itachi's too!!!
i love it when they always end up fucking eachothers brains out after arguing, lol
god please update sooner, can't wait till they hook up for real, and when Sasuke was behind that curtain, haha pricless, i wish i could've seen the look on his face, oh and Itachi's too!!!
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August 2, 2008 at 12:00 AM
I'm sorry but I was too busy trying to keep from drooling on my laptop to catch any gramatical errors or gaps in your plot ... and now that my self respect has been sacraficed you owe me an update !!! O.O please o.o;;;
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August 1, 2008 at 12:00 AM
You did really good, very hot and steamy!!..^^.. I'm looking forward to more.
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August 1, 2008 at 12:00 AM
That was hot! Naruto is a great uke. That second chapter was great without it being beta-ed.
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August 1, 2008 at 12:00 AM
I can beta for you to pick up any inconsistencies. email me at sonotgoingthere@gmail.com
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May 19, 2008 at 12:00 AM
je ne sais pas comment tu peux etre de le nord de Canada si tu ne peux pas ecrire dans le francais. je ne peux pas croire que tu peux parler le francais.
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May 18, 2008 at 12:00 AM
Oh wow! That was awesome!! ^_^ I Can't wait to see what happens next!! Looks Like Sasuke is gonna get an ass kickin!
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May 18, 2008 at 12:00 AM
Two words: Nice lemon
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May 18, 2008 at 12:00 AM
Good start!.. I could tell english isn't your native tongue, but overall you did really well. keep up the good work and I'll be waiting for more.^^