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You said you would update ....though If feel it has been abandon. Please give us another chapter, one more to end it all ...please.

Normally, I don't bother to review, but this one is too good to ignore. Please update soon. I have to say that this is one of the most original take on Sai I have seen so far, and I am curious to see how this love triangle will end.

Come on, pßlease update this story, I really want to know what happens next, please update

is that it? are you going to continue the story or let it die here?

whoo hoo! sasuke got the shock of a lifetime!! Though I do hope he learns to love Karin, I mean the guy does deserve a bit of happiness, and anyway once he finds out that the child that Sakura is carrying is his, his ego will sky-rocket. Though for now the upcoming confrontation will be extremely interesting. I really like your story and hope that you will soon update.

I can not believe this story doesn't have more reviews! Wake up people! Can't you tell a good story when you read it? Oh well, can't wait for the next chapter! Update soon! :)

wow, very nice chapter, and very romantic as well. Sasuke is going to have a real shock, when he returns home, though thankfully he already has someone else. I also found it very amusing, that Sai apparently had the same posture and demeanour of an Uchiha, but he then ruined it completely by confessing his love to Sakura, which gave us an insight in what an Uchiha with emotions were to look like (I wonder what the child is going to be like). Oh and will you include the twist with Madara? Please continue this excellent story.

sorry for not reviwing the previous chapter, it somehow slipped through my fingers, anywa here goes. It is quite an interesting situation that the three of them haven gotten themselves in. Sakura is pregnant with Sasuke`s child, who has run away, Sai has promised to take careof the child though has yet to realise that the feeling for Sakura is love, whileSakura openly loves but inwardly still has to accept that she loves Sai also, so TOTAL MESS!!! I want to see Sasuke´s face when he comes home..., though this Karin he has grabbed, is she modeled after the one in the manga? Though of course she is not the kunoichi that the one in the manga is. It certainly seems as if Sasuke must learn to love this Karin, though I´d really have to laugh if she ends up knocked up too, and then Sasuke will have to marry, to stop the sharingan falling into the wrong hands. In one word: Sasuke is fucke and when he realizes that 8hopefully with Sai watching) then this story will get interesting. Oh and hell yeah, bring on the SaixSakura lemon, I mean they´d really bring on a wonderful experience for us reeaders as both have huge emotional crack-ups (my aren`t I selfish!) Anyway, update!! This story has so much potential, as I have briefly outlined above, it deserves to be updated.

Love it! Interesting story! I cant wait to see what happens next. I'm very interested to see! You did good, I think it's an awesome story so far! XD

keep up the good work I'll be awaiting the update for sure!

Ok. First off, I would like to once again say that I think you are a great writer.I can see you take your time with your story and it's something you enjoy doing. However, I read your author's note and I saw that you told the readers right away that Sai would be OOC. Honestly, to me, and this is only my opinion so please don't think I'm bashing you, I felt he was too much out of character to be believable. I know he struggles with his emotions and his feelings so I just couldn't see him doing the things he did and said right away in the story. Perhaps later in the fic when he has developed a deeper understanding of his feelings dealing with Sakura and her pregnancy. But, this is your story, and it's about what you enjoy writing. So if you feel that's the way it needs to be then so be it. As long as your happy. This was just an opinion I wanted to share with you, since you said you wanted the good, bad, and ugly. I like your overall idea of the story though. I would just like to see these two take it slower and grow with one another.