rate_review Reviews

Interesting start. I liked that you made Sai a sibling of Sasuke. Something I haven't seen before. Since it's still the first chapter I'm still not very clear on the whole plot. So far it's Sasuke wanting revenge, which is something that I've definately read before. Hopefully with the twist on Sai it will be something different than what the usual is.

Something else I'm kind of unclear of. Is this a Sai centered story or Sasuke? From reading the summary I got the impression it was Sai, yet the first chapter seemed to be from Sasuke's perception of things.

There are a few grammar and spelling errors, but nothing to really stop the flow of the story. All in all I'm looking forward to more. This fic has caught my interest.