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October 31, 2010 at 12:00 AM
Girl... guy... whatever >< You fricking sent me on a roller coaster of emotions. I was all thinking from the summary that Naruto couldn't accept the proposal because he wanted to be the one to propose becuase he was the domm or something naive but otherwise understandable like that. Not... that he was in love with Itachi's brother. I think I had a little minature stroke back there when I was like 'nuuuu I wanted naruita!'
Don't get me wrong... I'm not opposed to SasuNaruSasu. But I tend to gravitate towards more odding pairings that could actually happen in the canon. So I was all hopped up and ready to get me some ItaNaruIta loving when bam you hit me with this. Completely did not see it coming. I was ready to strangle the other guy right with Itachi. I would have so been his get-a-way driver.
I even held out a small hope that Itachi would spend the rest of the tail winning Naruto back and ultimately getting him once he really one him over. Especially when Itachi went out psycho and was like I'm not giving you up. I... by this point... didn't mind if he ruffed up our favorite blonde a bit >< Rough him out of love of course <.<;
Maybe bitch slap him a bit ^^; But despite the fact I didn't get my dose of itanaru I still really like this story because it had a lot of surprises and suspense and it looks like Itachi will be okay. I'm happy for the blonde getting to have his confession accepted but I can't lie... wanted to see Naru-chan dominating Itachi.
Overall very good and a bit saddening that there isn't a sequel to see how Itachi recovers or something as well as see how Sasuke and Naruto deal with the arkwardness of Itachi. Would have been interesting but alls well that ends well. Wonderful fic, hot shower scene and sorry for the rambling rant.
Don't get me wrong... I'm not opposed to SasuNaruSasu. But I tend to gravitate towards more odding pairings that could actually happen in the canon. So I was all hopped up and ready to get me some ItaNaruIta loving when bam you hit me with this. Completely did not see it coming. I was ready to strangle the other guy right with Itachi. I would have so been his get-a-way driver.
I even held out a small hope that Itachi would spend the rest of the tail winning Naruto back and ultimately getting him once he really one him over. Especially when Itachi went out psycho and was like I'm not giving you up. I... by this point... didn't mind if he ruffed up our favorite blonde a bit >< Rough him out of love of course <.<;
Maybe bitch slap him a bit ^^; But despite the fact I didn't get my dose of itanaru I still really like this story because it had a lot of surprises and suspense and it looks like Itachi will be okay. I'm happy for the blonde getting to have his confession accepted but I can't lie... wanted to see Naru-chan dominating Itachi.
Overall very good and a bit saddening that there isn't a sequel to see how Itachi recovers or something as well as see how Sasuke and Naruto deal with the arkwardness of Itachi. Would have been interesting but alls well that ends well. Wonderful fic, hot shower scene and sorry for the rambling rant.
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May 22, 2008 at 12:00 AM
Good fics so far, but have you considered getting a beta to help with your spelling and grammar?.. just a suggestion.. and if you ever need help or someone to bounce ideas off of you can contact me on msn or yahoo at ladywolf_5@yahoo.com
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May 21, 2008 at 12:00 AM
This is fairly good, You need to work on your spacing and flow of your story. It started off slow and then shot off like a rocket...
*shurgs*
*shurgs*
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May 21, 2008 at 12:00 AM
That was good. I don't like Ita/naru either but even i felt a bit sorry for Itachi at the beginning. Nice ending
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May 21, 2008 at 12:00 AM
i really like this story i admit i like both yaoi pairings but sasuke was meant to be gay and don't change that it scared me lol....
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May 21, 2008 at 12:00 AM
I love it, I love it. I can't wait to see what happens next. The lemon was great. PLEASE UPDATE REALLY SOON.