rate_review Reviews

awww poor gaara hope you update soon!

Wow. This is a great story. I just read the whole thing in (mostly) one sitting. (took a break for sleep.)


I absolutely loved the developing dynamic between all the characters. Naruto's intense lonelyness behind his sunny facade, Gaara's guilt and guarded nature, and Kankuro's twisted manipulative insanity. All great elements in a fantastic story.
Not that Naruto isn't pushing boundaries either... Gaara's so confused. I can't wait for your next chapter update. Keep up the awesome work!

(Now I'm off to check out your artwork. ^^

This story is great so far. I really love the dynamics you have going with all the characters, and the way you develop the relationships. I can't wait for the next update, oh and by the way loving the long chapters.
I did notice some minor missteps with verb forms, however, so I was wondering if I could offer my services as a beta. If not that's fine, but I will still anxiously await your next chapter! Cheers!

wow i just read what you have here all in one shot, and i must say i love this fic!

A suprisingly good read. I'm enjoying the dynamic, and a lot of it makes more sense than you think it might to an outside reader, so don't feel discouraged at the unconventional nature of your own work.