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December 14, 2008 at 12:00 AM
I vote for Harem, I think as long as she's with Naruto Hinata will be happy. And Haku deserves some happiness to!
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December 14, 2008 at 12:00 AM
i like to vote for .... danm fro got how to spell heram (i am saying multiple women. my head hurts).
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December 14, 2008 at 12:00 AM
Great Story idea. I like the concept you are developing and cant wait to see where you take it! As far as you voting goes, I would vote for Naruto to have both of his bloodlines powers. As for the second question I would go for a Harem. It seems to me that your version of Naruto has to big of a heart to say no to any girl. And he seems to be good at endearing himself to the girls. Good luck with the story and if you need someone to proof read your stories, let me know and I'll do what I can.
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December 13, 2008 at 12:00 AM
Yes you have given Tayuya a reason to be in the harem (holds up "V" for victory). Before you ask I have a thing for Tayuya. As long as they don't conflict with each other I vote for both bloodlines. I am glad to hear my continued reading is appreciated and unless I hit a good zone you are updating faster then I would be. Please update soon. Signed a fan of Tayuya, Hinata, Anko, Kurenai, and Temari.
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December 13, 2008 at 12:00 AM
i vote harem and to have BOTH of his parents bloodlines!
anyways.....happy holidays!!
miko ~_^
anyways.....happy holidays!!
miko ~_^
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December 12, 2008 at 12:00 AM
Kushina never gets any play when it comes to these stories. Not that the whole bloodline limit thing isn't overdone to death in fanfics anyway, but in every story its always something he inherits from his father. Give him a bloodline limit from Whirlpool country. That would surprise everyone - including Dandjii!
Keep up the good work!
Keep up the good work!
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November 20, 2008 at 12:00 AM
Yes I knew it was Haku. I say go for the harem. Frankly I am surprised nothing attack her in the week she was chained up. Oh she had to of managed to get some water while she was chained up because seven days without water is out side almost everybody's limit of three days that the human body can go with out water, and before you ask that is a hard line that can only extend a day or two at the most. Signed a fan of Tayuya, Hinata, Anko, Kurenai, and Temari.
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November 17, 2008 at 12:00 AM
Hmm.. I don't wanna vote. Forcing Hinata to step up now that she has competition is great, but I somehow can never picture a believable Hinata participating in a Harem. Unless... maybe... ohh what if Haku initiates it? That would be interesting. Meh. I'm withholding any voting at this time and will just look forward to the surprise at whatever you come up with.
Keep up the good work!
Keep up the good work!
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September 27, 2008 at 12:00 AM
good so far
i think you should stick with a three genin one jonin squad
i think you should stick with a three genin one jonin squad
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August 11, 2008 at 12:00 AM
Writing the dialogue that way make things look bunched up but if that is the way you like to write so be it. I know Hinata's dad was a cold bastard but to put that seal on her is low. I say the girl in the forest is Haku. On the number in a team it depends on who you want the characters to interact with a lot, I know it means more work for you but I say for this story go with the four plus Jounin it just feels right for this story I am not sure why but is just does. Signed a fan of Hinata, Tayuya, Anko, Kuerani, and Temari.