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May 23, 2008 at 12:00 AM
Damn it! Every story that is ever written HAS to have Naruto in love with Sasuke, you nearly made me cry when Kiba felt so dejected! Anyway, the story was good, but there was an odd mixture of present and past tenses. I find when writing a story it is best to stick to one, past being preferred if the story is going to be any more than a page. Yeah, so, good story! X3