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by Nephele

schedule May 28, 2008 at 12:00 AM
Ok, just read chapter 2, and you make it a lot more believable in chapter 2, with his laughter. I am VERY curious about WHY. Can't wait to read more!

The part with Tsunade got a little chuckle, the part with Shizune made me outright laugh. Kudo's!
schedule May 28, 2008 at 12:00 AM
Wah! There's no more to read! You MUST update soon! In this third chapter, I found myself completely hooked. I want to know why? I also want to know what the tradition is. You have an excellent way of building suspense. Overall, this is one of the better Ita/Saku stories out there. Kudo's - and update soon!
schedule May 27, 2008 at 12:00 AM
Wow, this is one of the best stories I've read in a long time! Keep up the good work :) ja ne
schedule May 24, 2008 at 12:00 AM
I really am liking the pairing of Sakura and Itachi. I've never been a big fan of Sauske and her being together. Even though I did write a fic based on a SakaXSaus pairing. LOL Update soon!
schedule May 24, 2008 at 12:00 AM
I came upon this fic, and since I'm such a fool for Itachi, I had to take a peek, and I am so glad that I did. This fic has me wanting to read the next chapter and I can't wait to see what happens next. Great job!!!!
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schedule May 24, 2008 at 12:00 AM
ROFL. Now you have my entire attention!

Looking forward to your updates!