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for I Want to Hold Your Hand

by MoveThemHands

schedule November 12, 2008 at 12:00 AM
Oh dear God how I squealed. Beyond adorable. I'm thinking reading it at work wasn't a good idea *grin*

So much fluff! I still can't get over it. You make me love NejiNaru, you really do.
person Xoteem
schedule May 31, 2008 at 12:00 AM
Aww it's so sweet! I wanna put it on my pancakes. :D
person Akina
schedule May 26, 2008 at 12:00 AM
*giggles* Okay, okay... it is really cute! Despite the fact that I almost laughed myself off the chair when I saw what song you used for it! XD

You are a great fluff writer, Sawa. Hmph, you wrote a fluffy story for Ty but poor Kina-chan is fluff-less. *sighs* I feel the love. Haha.

Once again, beautiful, Sawa! *claps and throws a rose to you* Great job! *hearts*
person Honey
schedule May 25, 2008 at 12:00 AM
Aw man, how could you stop there!!!!!

That was too cute. I'm a fan of Sasu/Naru, but I'm slowly getting into other pairings and this is the first Neji/Naru piece I've read. Thanks for making it enjoyable for me. And I look forwards to reading more of your stories.
schedule May 25, 2008 at 12:00 AM
That was so adorable. It totally made me want to plot out a whole story based around Beatles songs. I could never write them because the story's yours AND I can't write to save my life but keeping ideas is still nice. Like "hard days night" for after a mission or "yesterday" if they were fighting or stuff. Would you mind if I did that? I'd never publish it or anything but I thought I'd better ask first :)
person qwerty
schedule May 24, 2008 at 12:00 AM
cute
I love The Beatles
person Aisujin
schedule May 24, 2008 at 12:00 AM
Dear god.

SO CUTE ^__^ I LOVE YOU SARA!

Neji and Naruto are perfect. But I do wonder what happens in the sequel~ So awesome...

Thank you sooo much, Sara!!! MOAR~~~~ :D
schedule May 24, 2008 at 12:00 AM
I love it! That's all I can say. It was wonderful!
schedule May 24, 2008 at 12:00 AM
"Why hadn't he noticed it before? He didn't know. Sitting up he looked around the large expanse of flowers surrounding them. There wasn't a single flower like the one Naruto had just presented him with."

OMG. NARUTO JUST KILLED THE ONLY RARE FLOWER IN THE FIELD BY PLUCKING IT.

I laughed so hard in my mind.I kept thinking, "Here Neji... this flower is like you... beautiful, and rare. But will die because I plucked it...just like a plucked your heart."

...

It worked in my brain.

Anyways, lovely as always. :D And I do enjoy the song.
schedule May 24, 2008 at 12:00 AM
Thank you for using a tasteful song that doesn't have to do with rap or hip hop. Cookies for you! ::gives her cookies:: Good job and very cute.