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a filler, nice - cant wait for chap8 teeheeheehaha!

At long last a new chapter. Oh I am sooo glad .Nice twist of Itachi telling Sakura the truth but is the real file really that easily accessible? Even to her...?And does the Hokage know. I mean seh is involved personally in a way seeing as she is a Senju. Whoah now it heats up. Oh yeah I liked Tsunade being eveil. Always so enjoyable.. Keep up the excellent work

Wow, neat, that rewrite was certainly better than the last chapter. It is nice to see how much you care about your story. The arguement betweem Yoshino and Temari was interesting, showing them both in a differential light The relationship between Itachi and Sakura had evolved in a great way so please update soon.

I am really loving this story. And I personally like the way Itachi acts in your story ^^ It's different in a good way.

i like your plotline and all...but if theres one thing you absolutely must fix it's your [of] s. they are killing me...

could OF
would OF
should OF

all those "of"s are supposed to be HAVE. we just SAY of...

rofl but other than that a great story. i want moar itasaku smex!!RAWRRR

I suppose Itachi and Sakura are now officially a couple,and I must say I am glad for them. I actually found it quite funny how human Sasuke appears, it`s almost as if he is reverting into a more childlike-state of behaviour to protect himself, and seeing as how abruptly his life turned on quite a few occasions it is not very surprising. The problem with his body is quite interestin as there has been clear explanition of the malady as of yet , so I am quite interested in that one too.Otherwise this chapter set a stage for quite a few new developments, an of that I am quite thankful. I must cofess though what the problem is if the story gets ever longer? As long as you maintain this high standard of story-telling, I am quite happy to read every chapter you give my hungry mind, and I know you are certainly able to keep up the pace so please continue and update.

well there are still some grammatical errors, that have featured in previous chapter left but otherwise the story in it`s grammar and spelling is ok.I know you said that the have to help their assigned case in the hospital,yet even so I find it strange how fast Sasuke ad Sakura are back on speaking terms. The idea of a pining Sasuke is quite funny so I am looking forward to that. The romance between Itachi and Sakura has somethin feral and dark to it, as though both were starving for affection which is a nice variaty. in my opinion though there is still one person missing from the picture, and that is Naruto of course,seeing on how he sees Sasuke and what Sasuke is to him as is Sakura.For the completion of the relationships Naruto is extremely important in my opinion

Well now I`m thouroghly confused. After all the bitching and hate between the two of them, sasuke and Sakura share a romantic moment?Nani? So the story stays mysterious. I wonder why Sasuke has problems with his memoryand what are Itachi`s motives? And finall how are Sakura and Itachi connected? All of these questions demand a fast answer, therefore update please

Ha. The sleep talking was hysterical. Tastes like purple. Dude. Hey, is Temari going to get pregnant? I'd love to see Yoshino (and Gaara's) reaction. Bwahahaha.

Before I even read this, I have to say this...

Awesome title to the chapter.

'Eyes fan I take it? :) :)