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for Bitter Tears

by Fallenrose

person gaara89
schedule June 22, 2008 at 12:00 AM
This story is so good! I'm so happy I get to read it before everyone else!!!!!
schedule June 22, 2008 at 12:00 AM
Another good chapter! Keep it up. ^_^
schedule June 22, 2008 at 12:00 AM
May I say that this chapter was very good in a sense of where the story is going and who it's dealing with. How you shown Sakura not wanting to take this job, and being obligated as a medic nin to her village. I hope you update soon, and I can't wait to see what you've writen in store for Sakura and Sasuke.
person Tank
schedule June 19, 2008 at 12:00 AM
Nice. I like the catharsis in chapter 1. And this is one rare gem in AFFnet, one that actually deals properly with all the emotions resultant from the manga plot. And while Sakura has matured, they are all still very much in character. You go, girl! Don't abandon this now. :)
schedule June 17, 2008 at 12:00 AM
Wow! Good update! I'm lovin' it! ^_^
schedule June 16, 2008 at 12:00 AM
Let me just say that this story is going very well so far. I love how you've expressed how Sakura is feeling about Sasuke in both of the chapters so far, and how Naruto is trying to show Sakura that there is some good in Sasuke. I hope to you update soon; just because this story is really good, and I would love to see where the whole Sasuke and Sakura thing is going.
schedule May 26, 2008 at 12:00 AM
Really good start. I love the way you've written Sakura. lol update soon
schedule May 25, 2008 at 12:00 AM
This fic is excellent, and very well written with how you explained Sakura's emotion towards Sasuke. Even with the fact of him hurting her and Naruto for so long. I hope that you will update soon because it sounds really good so far. There is little grammar in the fic, but all grammer leaks sometimes when we don't realize it ourselves.