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for Giving In

by XHidaka

person nivell
schedule June 20, 2009 at 12:00 AM
This was so lovely...just hot damn, you made Kiba so fucking hot that I too wantedt to jump him in the shower. Shikamaru is so damn lucky...hope you write more Kiba/Shika fics!
person Sanee
schedule May 26, 2008 at 12:00 AM
Hehe, nice story. The ending line was just priceless. XD
Also, nice imagery when you said Shika jumped into the shower with his clothes on still. Hm...I think that's gonna be burned into my mind.
person Croup
schedule May 26, 2008 at 12:00 AM
Hahah! It sure took Shikamaru a long time to figure it out. A guy like Kiba must have had to jack himself like crazy to keep from giving in to his more primal urges.

Loved your description of Kiba exercising. Damn, what a stud. ;3