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May 31, 2008 at 12:00 AM
Hiyas!!!!
This story is looking really REALLY good!! ^_________________^
I'm very interested in this fic, and particularly in that little part where Naruto said "what he had become" (or something like that)...... My mind is already spinning with the possibilities!! ^w^
So a serial killing vamp and a wolf....... so many theories... xD
Can't wait to see next chapie... and the sex god that WILL (please? *kicked-puppy-eyes* please?) appear no? =D
Hope see you soon (and more of smexy think-he's-stright-but-not-quite Naru-chan!!! xD)
Ja nE!! ^.^
This story is looking really REALLY good!! ^_________________^
I'm very interested in this fic, and particularly in that little part where Naruto said "what he had become" (or something like that)...... My mind is already spinning with the possibilities!! ^w^
So a serial killing vamp and a wolf....... so many theories... xD
Can't wait to see next chapie... and the sex god that WILL (please? *kicked-puppy-eyes* please?) appear no? =D
Hope see you soon (and more of smexy think-he's-stright-but-not-quite Naru-chan!!! xD)
Ja nE!! ^.^
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May 31, 2008 at 12:00 AM
want narusasu. its deffinetly good. and man i was drooling over sweet innocent naru
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May 30, 2008 at 12:00 AM
Awesome story. The plot seems to be quite interesting. I hope to read more soon.
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May 30, 2008 at 12:00 AM
Very interesting beginning! I wouldn't worry too much about sounding like Hamilton. There is a whole line of modern day supernatural role-playing books out there that cover the same basics that you find in most vampire/werewolf fiction. Saying that, I have read the Blake series up until it got to the point where it was more about sex than the supernatural (really ironic coming from me if you've read any of my stuff, lol.)
Seriously though, a good read to start with and I am looking forward to more! XD
Seriously though, a good read to start with and I am looking forward to more! XD
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May 30, 2008 at 12:00 AM
I know I read this when the first chapter was put up, but I don't know why I didn't review. Oh well. Love the premise to the story, seems like it has a good plotline and hopefully we'll see some fun interactions going on. Can't wait to see the next part.
BTW: The water bottle incident was classic but well played. Kudos!
BTW: The water bottle incident was classic but well played. Kudos!
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May 29, 2008 at 12:00 AM
Heh, perverted thoughts are always good fun!
Can't wait to see yours though... They seem... Promissing...
Anyway, please update soon, I really think that your story is good, and going somewhere.
Can't wait to see yours though... They seem... Promissing...
Anyway, please update soon, I really think that your story is good, and going somewhere.
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May 28, 2008 at 12:00 AM
I really like this. And yes I see the resemblence with anita blake. Also, have you read Charlain harris' 'dead' series. It's very good too. I can't wait to see waht you do with this.
Slave
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May 28, 2008 at 12:00 AM
Ooo! Im excited for this story! I dont see many vamp fics for Sasu/Naru and if i do see them they never get updated or finished so I hope you will stick around for the rest of this already marvelous fic?! Please update soon!
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May 28, 2008 at 12:00 AM
I really liked this. For your first fanfic it's great. And well vampires are hot, aren't they? ;-) I couldn't really find anything to criticize and would love to see more of this story. You have to make Naruto realize he is not as straight as he may thinks he is after all.
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May 28, 2008 at 12:00 AM
i love those books and i cant wait to see what you do with this story next ch please