AFF Fiction Portal

rate_review Reviews

for Ho-kage

by Clayton

person shingen
schedule June 23, 2008 at 12:00 AM
If there is ever a story that could use a sequel it is this one. A little porn, a little absurdist humour, and a pinch of cinnamon, what a cake. Genius!
person Ero-Bontenmaru
schedule June 10, 2008 at 12:00 AM
Nice sexy fic! I liked it. Hope you write more.
person Clayton
schedule June 7, 2008 at 12:00 AM
You guys could write those stories too you know.
person KaelHyun
schedule June 6, 2008 at 12:00 AM
Vary interesting it would be better if it was a Harem Fic
person NarutosBrat
schedule June 6, 2008 at 12:00 AM
*“And that’s why for perfectly good reasons that would make sense to anybody that read them,” Hinata said. “Naruto and I want you to teach us all about sex.” Next to her Naruto nodded seriously.
“Well, that was a concise and well thought out explanation and makes perfect sense in a real world way. You said it in such a way that nobody could possibly claim it was merely a lame excuse to have sex in an anime setting or something,”*

You see, this is why I love your stories. It's like a blatant, kiss my ass parody, with fun and humor galore, and wonderfully written smut. The only thing better than your stories, are the MSTs for them. This was by far one of the hottest stories you've done. I can't wait for an MST of this, I know it'll be good. By the way, I've seen that movie, and it's not all that good.
schedule June 3, 2008 at 12:00 AM
HOLY... Wait a minute wrong choice of words,Hmmm... Lucky son of a kitsune in heat!!! Please do more of this story or another with Naruto and a couple of girls... hey maybe you could do a Naruto with Hinata and Hana story. I don't think that would be much of a problem for a great writer like you. Still I loved your story and like usual want more. Keep up the great work!
schedule May 29, 2008 at 12:00 AM
well this is interesting don't know wether you will continue or not but good job