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for A Subtle Seducing

by Lisea18

person gabby
schedule December 13, 2008 at 12:00 AM
OMG! That was ORGASMIC! BRILLIANT! FABULOUS! AWESOME! GREAT! MAGNIFICENT! and absolutely HOTTTT! loved every second of the read, u rock! no u r A GOD! and my god how grateful i am to you that u actually wrote a NARUsasu story! cause i'm so sick of all this sasunarus stories, and they fucking make naruto such a pussy it literally makes me sick to my stomach. and it's rarity to find Narusau decent/good stories. but thanks god we have You!!! we're saved! ok, enough of my babbling, the point: YOUR STORY WAS DELICIOUS AND MASTERFULLY/ PRO-LVL WRITEN! i hope u don't mind... but to show U my gratitude for your lovely work i'm gonna send you lots of: kisses, hugs, and chocolate cookies! (hope u like them, if not ignore them XD). i'll be watching out for more of your works, k?
XOXOX
ja ne!
person Gabby
schedule October 30, 2008 at 12:00 AM
Such a tease!BuT-- oMg-- So-- hot.
person Telpei
schedule October 29, 2008 at 12:00 AM
Hahahahahahaha! I love this story. Yay Naruto for not being a dunce and passing the test! Now if only his lab tests would come back negative. *sigh*. Theoretically it shouldn't take more than two weeks.... though for Naruto that's probably two weeks too long to wait. I'm looking forward to reading about plan B lol. I wonder if he'll get away with it... Please update soon!
schedule October 29, 2008 at 12:00 AM
OH damn!!! O_O (yum yum) ehehehehehehe


Naruto's trying to be sneaky. I hope he succeeds! >:) hehehehe
Keep up the great work!
schedule October 28, 2008 at 12:00 AM
OMG!!
why did Juugo have to come and ruin everything
i loved this chapter i knew all along Sasuke was kidding about Hinata
Please update real soon i'm really anxious to see if Naruto's plan actually works
person MewMew2
schedule October 2, 2008 at 12:00 AM
And the tension rises! Thanks for the superb cliffhanger, I highly anticipate the next chapter.
person I_Luv_Shikamaru
schedule October 1, 2008 at 12:00 AM
I love this story and cant wait for more... but you update so slowly! *cries* anyhoo, another great chap. cant wait till the next!
person Dragon7
schedule September 30, 2008 at 12:00 AM
I Love it chapter 5 was great and I know chapter 6 will be even better so update soon.
person Allys
schedule September 30, 2008 at 12:00 AM
OMG!!! This is soo much FUN!!!! LOL, I LOVE this story XD. *grins like an idiot*. I Trust Sasuke!! I trust Naruto even more, he loves Sasuke but I don't think he could really do anything truly heinous, he just wouldn't be Naruto anymore and then Sasuke would be pissed *HUGS U* That's the most fun I've had reading a new story in Ages!! I hope you update soon!! ♥
person Kimra
schedule September 29, 2008 at 12:00 AM
hmm i trust sasuke! :D And I want to read the next chapter! (maybe soon?) :D