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June 5, 2008 at 12:00 AM
I'm glad that you're making it longer than two chapters. This is a really promissing good story.
ANd I love the way you're making Suigetsu.
And for the writting, don't worry. There are a few mistakes here and there, but nothing horrible, and you can't tell that you aren't english at all!
I love the way you're doing it from both point of views as well.
Update soon please!!!
XD LANE
ANd I love the way you're making Suigetsu.
And for the writting, don't worry. There are a few mistakes here and there, but nothing horrible, and you can't tell that you aren't english at all!
I love the way you're doing it from both point of views as well.
Update soon please!!!
XD LANE
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June 5, 2008 at 12:00 AM
What's the next step?!! I need to know.. I mean.. how do you go from being the pervert that molests someone on the metro to the boyfriend???.. lol..please update this soon
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June 5, 2008 at 12:00 AM
Goshhhhh, i love it!!! my man, u officially rock! i love this story, plz upgrade soon!!! ^________^ a bit disturbing with all that body parts abuse, pet-fishie-suigetsu. but damn, it was soo funny i almost fell from my chair laughing like an idiot. my roomie came in with frickin scared out of her mind face, which only hardened my laugher.... sorry i began babbling... yeah, u'r great and i love this story, waiting for new chapters - that what u need to know, ja ne.
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May 31, 2008 at 12:00 AM
I love it. God Naruto can be a complete dimwit sometimes :) Something tells me Sasuke isn't going to fall easily for the "molestation" technique.
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May 31, 2008 at 12:00 AM
YOU MUST PUT UP THE NEXT CHAPTER!!!!
THis is to good for me to miss.
Plus, you put a cliffhanger and all.
Funny, I've never heard of that saying. But I have to say that you had nothing to warn us about. I couldn't have said that you were French (if you are, but I'm guessing so) if you hadn't said.
So please keep going. I can't wait.
XD Lane
THis is to good for me to miss.
Plus, you put a cliffhanger and all.
Funny, I've never heard of that saying. But I have to say that you had nothing to warn us about. I couldn't have said that you were French (if you are, but I'm guessing so) if you hadn't said.
So please keep going. I can't wait.
XD Lane
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May 31, 2008 at 12:00 AM
Naruto's too funny.and I got to wonder how his hedgehog is going to react or how long will it take him to do so. Definately looking forward to seeing some more interaction between those two.
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May 31, 2008 at 12:00 AM
Haha very cute so far!!! I like Naruto's eccentric-ness!!! It's very.... Naruto XD Great job so far!!! I cant wait to read the next chap!!!
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May 30, 2008 at 12:00 AM
Lmao, what has Naruto gotten himself into? Well I can imagine, you sure painted a very smexy picture of Sasuke. This story is so far very well written and pretty addicting.
Please update soon, I can't wait to see where the plot goes!
Please update soon, I can't wait to see where the plot goes!
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May 30, 2008 at 12:00 AM
Wow. This sounds very promising! I look forward to your next update!!
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May 30, 2008 at 12:00 AM
I'm looking forward to your next update; this story is very good. One thing I found was this: "always wore a scowl when it rang to The Kill’s 30 Seconds to Mars." The Kill is the name of the song, 30 Seconds to Mars is the band :) Really, it doesn't matter, anyways, but I thought I'd point it out, just in case.
*goes off to read your other fics*
*goes off to read your other fics*