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for His Eyes

by kamikumai

schedule May 31, 2008 at 12:00 AM
This was really well written. I felt like you captured the emotions of the two perfectly. I especially loved the mouth-to-mouth part where it was like a transferring of souls instead of kissing and I love how you ended it with the last two lines. Nice work!
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schedule May 30, 2008 at 12:00 AM
Yay!!! Another good Sai/Naru, I love these!!! Thank you. It was well done!
Slave
schedule May 30, 2008 at 12:00 AM
absolutely wonderfully written (not to mention hot as fuck) sainaru! totally made my morning. thanks for sharing! would love to read more of this pairing from you!