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October 1, 2008 at 12:00 AM
That. Freaking. Story. Made. Me . So. Freaking. Happy.
I don't do fan-girls squeals. And I did one over this story. So sweet and perfect. I love it.
I don't do fan-girls squeals. And I did one over this story. So sweet and perfect. I love it.
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June 4, 2008 at 12:00 AM
Lovely story. I like how you remained sensitive to the relationship between Naruto and Sasuke, without taking from the relationship between Sasuke and Sakura, or Naruto and Sai.
Great job.
Great job.
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June 4, 2008 at 12:00 AM
Loved it! you can't make bad chapters...you're amazing..*completely astounded* Can't wait for the next one, so keep up with the good work! Take care. Hugs
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June 4, 2008 at 12:00 AM
Part II is coming, YEAH!!!!!! ('lovely hinata-chan'? *blush*)
Thank you thank you thank you!
I just love this story so much that i printed it so i can read it over and over again! YES I'M CRAZY LIKE THAT!
So I reaaaaaalllly look forward to part II especially since there will be more sai/naru (they are so cute) and especially more Iwa (I'm so in love with the new little itachi and his hokage teddy bear).
That sasu/naru scene was really a new starting point for their friendship and I do believe sasuke needed it just as much as naruto! Since Sai is OFFICIALLY (hinata-chan does a happy dance here) naruto's lover so that means sasuke can be his best friend again, right?
Thank you again for this wonderfull story!!!!!
Did i already mention that i reaallyyyyyy look forward to part II? Yes?
Thank you thank you thank you!
I just love this story so much that i printed it so i can read it over and over again! YES I'M CRAZY LIKE THAT!
So I reaaaaaalllly look forward to part II especially since there will be more sai/naru (they are so cute) and especially more Iwa (I'm so in love with the new little itachi and his hokage teddy bear).
That sasu/naru scene was really a new starting point for their friendship and I do believe sasuke needed it just as much as naruto! Since Sai is OFFICIALLY (hinata-chan does a happy dance here) naruto's lover so that means sasuke can be his best friend again, right?
Thank you again for this wonderfull story!!!!!
Did i already mention that i reaallyyyyyy look forward to part II? Yes?
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June 3, 2008 at 12:00 AM
Aww, that's so sweet! ^__^
First of all, I like your writing. The descriptiveness, the lulls, the anticipation, even the technical points and formatting. It all comes together very well. And the SaiNaru smut was appreciated too. ;)
Most importantly, I love the characterizations of everyone, from the main chars to the OCs to (as little as she appeared) Tsunade. The emotions, their interpretations, their misunderstandings, the maturity of their actions, all of it. How these characters we knew as teenagers have grown up and changed and understand each other, you show that well in your writing. Yet, you also make sure that elements of their youth linger, as in Naruto's whining about Ichiraku and then the babbling when he's talking to Sai then later Sasuke, it's very adorable and almost nostalgic to see that in a fic where they're clearly adults. I liked it. :)
Oh, and I for one absolutely ADORE Iwa. (Hell, the whole Uchiha family here.) The way you described him to come into talking with full capacity. Cute. A little unnerving, yes, but cute. I love imagining Sasuke's face as "dumbfounded" when Furiko was born. And when Sakura slapped Sasuke on the arm? ^__^b
I like how you ended the story, that final confrontation and the friendship that Sasuke and Naruto came to, a very conclusive acceptance of where they stood and where they came from. Down with angsty endings! =D jk, but I do love a happy ending.
Anyway, I love this story so far~! And news that you're going to be writing more about Iwa = yay! ^__^ Definitely looking forward to it.
First of all, I like your writing. The descriptiveness, the lulls, the anticipation, even the technical points and formatting. It all comes together very well. And the SaiNaru smut was appreciated too. ;)
Most importantly, I love the characterizations of everyone, from the main chars to the OCs to (as little as she appeared) Tsunade. The emotions, their interpretations, their misunderstandings, the maturity of their actions, all of it. How these characters we knew as teenagers have grown up and changed and understand each other, you show that well in your writing. Yet, you also make sure that elements of their youth linger, as in Naruto's whining about Ichiraku and then the babbling when he's talking to Sai then later Sasuke, it's very adorable and almost nostalgic to see that in a fic where they're clearly adults. I liked it. :)
Oh, and I for one absolutely ADORE Iwa. (Hell, the whole Uchiha family here.) The way you described him to come into talking with full capacity. Cute. A little unnerving, yes, but cute. I love imagining Sasuke's face as "dumbfounded" when Furiko was born. And when Sakura slapped Sasuke on the arm? ^__^b
I like how you ended the story, that final confrontation and the friendship that Sasuke and Naruto came to, a very conclusive acceptance of where they stood and where they came from. Down with angsty endings! =D jk, but I do love a happy ending.
Anyway, I love this story so far~! And news that you're going to be writing more about Iwa = yay! ^__^ Definitely looking forward to it.
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June 3, 2008 at 12:00 AM
Great chapter - I am glad to know that there will be a continuation of this story - especially since it will be looking at Naruto and Sai's relationship. I'll be keeping my eyes open!
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June 3, 2008 at 12:00 AM
Yes! You must do Part II and SOON! The Frizz commands it of you! I wanna know more about Iwa and the whole Naru/Sai thing is just too pretty. Definitely wanna see Sai try out the toy idea! LOL
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June 3, 2008 at 12:00 AM
I LOVE your story! Please continue! I always liked naruto/sai pairings! Apart from Naruto the character i liked best in your story is Iwa! He reacts so differently around naruto, I hope we will see more of the 2 of them, anyway naruto has to say goodbye to him before he leaves, maybe he will mend his friendship with Sasuke - teme at the same time, that teme really is socially retarded! He couldn't tell naruto that he really missed his friendship! I hope things will get better between them! Please continue this story, the universe you created is really GREAT!!!! Anyway 'Part I' means there is a part II, right?
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June 2, 2008 at 12:00 AM
this is an awesome read. i eagerly look foward to the next update.
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June 1, 2008 at 12:00 AM
Wow i just love your fic. The interaction between Iwa and Naruto is so sweet. It's amazing when one person can change the life of someone for the better. Oh and sai and naruto loveness is super cute. Can't wait to see more~