rate_review Reviews

This chapter was as amazing. I loved it. Your such a talented author, really, it's so nice to read the cahpters because the language and structure are so well written and placed that you really enjoy reading it. And the contents are, of course, incredible. I really love that you've made it so realistic and that's really rare here at AFF, not many people are able to do that actually, they try, but they never succeed in the way you have.
And again, SaiNaru is a rare pairing. Usually it's just oneshots. So thanks again for writing one!
Keep up with the good work, and I'll be there reading and reviewing it.
Take care. Hugs

Hi there, love. Just wanted to stop by and congratulate you on a wonderfully written story. I absolutely loved it. The plot, the characters' personalities, everything. I'm not usually into OCs, but I gotta say, Iwa really grew on me these short three chapters. A mini-Itachi with an apparent hero-worship for Naruto...Brilliant touch! I really loved the way they connected. And I've always thought that there weren't enough Sai/Naruto stories out there; yours more than makes up for it though. The interactioon between the two is a wonderful thing to observe and read about. These three chapters, in my opinion, were sort of a base for events to come. I'll be looking forward to seeing where you decide to take things next, sugar. Once again, congratulations on a story well done. I hope to get to read more soon! Kisses!
P.S.
I strongly recommend you listen to 'The World is Not Enough' by Garbage. It's an absolutely mind-blowing song, in my opinion, and I think the lyrics go beautifully with this story.

I really like this fic, beautiful work on the characterizations and the detail. I look forward to reading more and to see how everything plays out. I'm glad that Naruto has moved on and loves Sai. Don't get me wrong I like fics about Sasuke and Naruto but I adore Sai and feel that he doesn't get enough love.

I'm pleased to see that this is going to stay an Naruto and Sai fic. Keep up the fabulous work.

Cai

I LOVE THIS STORY! Great chapter! Sigh!

Oh, wow, this is a FABULOUS story! I started reading and got sucked right in. Your writing is smooth and lyrical, great editing/word choices.
Great character development, each is flawed, but like/lovable. I hope Sasuke and Naruto can become friends again, but I really love the relationship Naruto has with Sai. I hope that this is a long and prolific story - I am looking forward to the next chapter!

Love it! There are so few SaiNaru out there, so thanks for writing one! this fic is really good, i can't wait to read more. So please don't take to long at writing new chapters and updating them. Take care. Hugs

Oh my goodness, this was good. I really liked your characterizations of Naruto and Sai, and I'm looking forward to more.