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Hello! I really love this story, and I'm loving Sasuke as a loving daddy. I'll be on the lookout in case you decide to keep going with it!

Um, hi...again. Great story, absolutely love it but are you planning on updating anytime soon? Please say you are.

Awewome fic glad I found it today. lol like how Sasuke was asked all those questions before he was told he was pregnant and then he promptly passed out. He would make a good father and they already seem like family the 3 of them. Also was funny how he got cornered in the park by mothers on his first trip out with Haru.

lol at Sasuke walking in on Itachi taking care of the baby singing to it and him passing out from the shock. Itachi's reaction and Sasuke's thoughts when Haru started wailing when they were about to make love, was priceless. Like Itachi's special kisses and how he wont let anyone get close to him except Sasuke. Cute story. Thanks for sharing your story.

Love the concept and the way the story is shaping up. There are frequent mistakes though, and i was wondering if you would allow me to beta, if you don't have anyone else to do it for you. I'm not spectacular at it, but i'd be able to catch mistakes in spelling, grammar, and POV, as well as fix up an awkward sentence here and there.

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ok....good plot...only a few suggestions 1. Try making your chapters a bit longer 2. Add a bit more description and don't be scared to add some details of sexual encounters no one here will mind XD 3. I noticed once in a while that you put 'I' or 'me' in place of 'he' or 'him'. Try keeping it to one style....3rd or 1st not both and if you need help catching it get yourself a beta if you want I could beta for you since I have a habit of picking up on things like that. Otherwise I like it so far and I can't wait for the next chapter ^.^

I can’t wait to read the next chapter so keep on writing and UPDATE SOON.

I am in total agreeance with "Sasuke's" mentality of little children. Their only real purpose is to be put in cutesy stories like this for comic relief... and maybe for species survival. Maybe. Oh man, the first time a mother asked me to change her kid's diaper, I totally gagged. I mean, the kid was walking and talking, so doesn't that constitute potty-trained behavior? What was this kid doing, still wearing diapers? So I handed the little girl the diaper and asked her if she knew how to put one of them on. She probably could have if she tried, she is seriously that old-looking.

Sasuke should have tried Nitequil. Shuts those brats up fast. Then again, if he would have drugged them, the story would have been over. Or maybe not; someone could have stopped by, seen the empty bottles of Nitequil scattered about the floor, a passed-out baby, and suspected the worst. Now THAT would have been a story. BTW, is "Zack" a foreign exchange student? I don't believe very many Asians carry the name "Zack".

roflmao. they seem like a family don't they?