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for Missing Me

by CrimsonIris

person ChrystalStar
schedule August 8, 2009 at 12:00 AM
Poor Sasuke! to be left all alone like that... but it's his own damn fault, I supose. And it makes you wonder what's going on with Sakura. I wish this weren't a one shot, but it does work as one I guess. Its just that I have so many questions now! Who is the guy? Why is she dating him? Has she really forgotten Sasuke?
Thanks for writing this! It makes me think about both sides of the story, Sasuke and Sakura's. Its so sad!
person Alicia
schedule July 12, 2009 at 12:00 AM
Wow. Just... wow. I can't believe you captured his character so well! It's hard to write angst without going over the top. Thanks, and I can't wait to read your other work!
schedule November 24, 2008 at 12:00 AM
OMG! The same thing happened to me when I changed from one University to another. I always thought my old friends would give me a call, visit sometime, or at least have a little time for me whenever I dropped by to see them, but I was wrong.

Hey, all in all, it was a really nice story. Nicely written, very realistic, and it reminded me of something I didn't want to forget. Thanks!
schedule June 6, 2008 at 12:00 AM
Very well written. A nice one shot.
schedule June 2, 2008 at 12:00 AM
Sad, but I like it ^_^ Though I'd have liked more SasuSaku interaction ^^
person Lunar84
schedule June 2, 2008 at 12:00 AM
I liked this. It would have been cleaner had the paragraphs been spaced out. Everything else looked good though. Loved that he came back and saw that there was more to her than he thought. Would have liked to see a jealous outrage from Sasuke where he swore revenge for forgetting him or something to that effect. But, it was very nice and I agree it has potential to be something more than a one-shot. Looking forward to more from you.
schedule June 1, 2008 at 12:00 AM
Im know you designated this as a one-shot, yet somehow I get the feeling, that there could be some following up chapters expanding the story. Why not try it for the beginning seems to be made for such a story