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September 19, 2008 at 12:00 AM
Yay!! Happy endings for all (and the story went out with a bang! hehehe pun!)
Congrats on finishing your story! Thats a huge freaking accomplishment, especially one so long. I know I personally enjoyed reading the hell out of it. ^^
Keep up the great work. I look forward to future things.
Congrats on finishing your story! Thats a huge freaking accomplishment, especially one so long. I know I personally enjoyed reading the hell out of it. ^^
Keep up the great work. I look forward to future things.
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September 17, 2008 at 12:00 AM
Loved the ending. So... KAkashi. PErfect!
XD Really an awesome story!
XD LANE
XD Really an awesome story!
XD LANE
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September 7, 2008 at 12:00 AM
I can't believe I've waited this long to read this story...
It's not over is it? I mean, it's so gooood, that would be a pity.
Well, Anyway.... I really like it and would comment about everything (such as Sasuke's personnality which I LOVE) but it's late and there's school tomorrow (shucks does it).
so the only way that you'll get all of my comments is by posting another chapter. Soon.
XD And yes, that may be blackmail XD
XD LANE
It's not over is it? I mean, it's so gooood, that would be a pity.
Well, Anyway.... I really like it and would comment about everything (such as Sasuke's personnality which I LOVE) but it's late and there's school tomorrow (shucks does it).
so the only way that you'll get all of my comments is by posting another chapter. Soon.
XD And yes, that may be blackmail XD
XD LANE
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August 28, 2008 at 12:00 AM
I knew this moment would eventually come where Nico was taken. Regardless of knowing that, it still fills me with dread.
Keep up the great work!
Keep up the great work!
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August 28, 2008 at 12:00 AM
Whoa!
Awesome chapter!! (and two in one day.. kick ass~!)
I think Nico may be all "wtf" about Naruto and Sasuke in their ninja gear, but I also don't think in this situation that it will matter much at all.
Keep up the great work!
Awesome chapter!! (and two in one day.. kick ass~!)
I think Nico may be all "wtf" about Naruto and Sasuke in their ninja gear, but I also don't think in this situation that it will matter much at all.
Keep up the great work!
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August 3, 2008 at 12:00 AM
look i really like this story and i would rally like to read it top to bottom so can u tell me how long will it take for u to update it...my email is vivi_2cool@yahoo.com pls pls pls pls let me know.kisses
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June 8, 2008 at 12:00 AM
i think this is a really good story. i like how you waited until sasuke and naruto got together before focusing on their mission. getting to see them in a different setting is awesome especially as they are still ninjas. i wonder who the back up will be and if they can be competition for sasuke (a jealous sasuke is a sexy sasuke). i can't wait til the next update.
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June 5, 2008 at 12:00 AM
wow! a ton of chapters in one shot!! awesome!!!
yay for Sasuke and Naruto becoming official!
Also, now I'm really wondering what's been kidnapping people (and possibly eating their memories??) The whole reason for their mission has always been on the backburner... easily forgetting the reason they went on this mission to begin with! Now Amaya is gone and what's with the owl shrine?? That one totally threw me for a loop!
Keep up the great work! Can't wait for the next bombardment of chapters. >:) hehehe
yay for Sasuke and Naruto becoming official!
Also, now I'm really wondering what's been kidnapping people (and possibly eating their memories??) The whole reason for their mission has always been on the backburner... easily forgetting the reason they went on this mission to begin with! Now Amaya is gone and what's with the owl shrine?? That one totally threw me for a loop!
Keep up the great work! Can't wait for the next bombardment of chapters. >:) hehehe
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June 5, 2008 at 12:00 AM
Well first I'm gonna say well done!!
I think this is great so far, I like the way the characters act, though they may not be 'in character' too much. But then I like the way their personalities keep popping up XD
I think you're doing a great job, and while I love the interactions they're having, I think you need to also include some stuff on the reason they're there, the disappearances. I like the development of the relationships (Am loving Nico!!!) but it seems strange that they have not investigated their reason for being there.
Anyway, I'm going to stop now because I think I'm repeating myself, but great job and keep up the good work ok?
I think this is great so far, I like the way the characters act, though they may not be 'in character' too much. But then I like the way their personalities keep popping up XD
I think you're doing a great job, and while I love the interactions they're having, I think you need to also include some stuff on the reason they're there, the disappearances. I like the development of the relationships (Am loving Nico!!!) but it seems strange that they have not investigated their reason for being there.
Anyway, I'm going to stop now because I think I'm repeating myself, but great job and keep up the good work ok?
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June 5, 2008 at 12:00 AM
lol, hello again!!! *waves*
I must say, I am very impressed with the speed of you updates XD and the turn the story has taken!
I like the mystery surrounding the teenagers going missing, and can't wait until you put up more chapter, another 10 or so would be good! :D
Anyway, most of what I would normally say has been said in my last review, so once more, good work!!
I must say, I am very impressed with the speed of you updates XD and the turn the story has taken!
I like the mystery surrounding the teenagers going missing, and can't wait until you put up more chapter, another 10 or so would be good! :D
Anyway, most of what I would normally say has been said in my last review, so once more, good work!!