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October 21, 2009 at 12:00 AM
Still loving this fiction mate.
Been a couple of months since you've written a new chapter.
Hope you havn't quit :3
Been a couple of months since you've written a new chapter.
Hope you havn't quit :3
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May 15, 2009 at 12:00 AM
I nearly jumped out of my seat when I saw a new chapter of this, please get your muse back asap, this story is too good to stop
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April 26, 2009 at 12:00 AM
I greatly enjoy this story. When I am reading it, it feels like the actual characters from the manga. You would be surprised how many people are not able to produce that feeling when writing about other people's work. I think you are doing a fantastic job so far and I am looking forward to the continuation of the story.
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February 16, 2009 at 12:00 AM
Hey eksim. I like the progress in the story. I got to know something though. If Sasuke did put a genjutsu in Naruto's mind. How can he break free of it. Well besides Ino helping him. I just don't know why Sasuke would care about anyone accept him and his revenge. I hope you put more chapters up for your other story soon. I like both POV's ur doing. It makes you think of each person and how they are going to react to certain questions or actions. Take care
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February 16, 2009 at 12:00 AM
Wow is all i can say, this is a very well written well thought out and very nice chapter overall.
I would say please make a chapter or whatever you can cause i would like to read more on this story.
please keep up the excellent work. your an excellent writer.
I would say please make a chapter or whatever you can cause i would like to read more on this story.
please keep up the excellent work. your an excellent writer.
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February 11, 2009 at 12:00 AM
YAY FUCKING UPDATE!!! I like the fluffiness at the end its so damn cute XD. Will Sasuke come to Konoha to abduct her I wonder? since he did put a illusion into Narutos mind. Ill hceck for more updates and hopefully Naruto gets laid!
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January 31, 2009 at 12:00 AM
Great chapter i gotta say your a very Ultimate writer. i hope to read the next chapter soon, also both of your stories are very great and if i am giving another review to this one in case it didn't go through the first time.
word of advice: keep doing what your doing!
word of advice: keep doing what your doing!
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January 13, 2009 at 12:00 AM
FUCKKKKKKKKKKKKKKKK!!! Why did the chapter stop when Naruto was about to wake up from that nightmare!!! Damnit I wanted to know what happened x.x Above all else Good job XD Ill be back for more!!!
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January 12, 2009 at 12:00 AM
nice nightmarish hell you wrote there... and as far as that male/female comment at the end, I'm a dragon, and we're kinda A-sexual
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October 19, 2008 at 12:00 AM
duck beg and plead is very sound advice. very good plot. good character development. the chapters could be longer but you can't have every thing.