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October 3, 2008 at 12:00 AM
interesting to say the least, I give it a 6 (highest number I give for my rating system, the lowest is 3)
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October 2, 2008 at 12:00 AM
Can't tell you how good this fiction is!
It really reminds me of how it is to be in love with a person you care for, but in my case, i never got the chance to really show my feelings for that girl.
But the real beuty of this fic is that it brings back the wonderful memories I had with that special girl.
Thank for an awesome fic and please, please continue on it for all eternity.
Thank you!
It really reminds me of how it is to be in love with a person you care for, but in my case, i never got the chance to really show my feelings for that girl.
But the real beuty of this fic is that it brings back the wonderful memories I had with that special girl.
Thank for an awesome fic and please, please continue on it for all eternity.
Thank you!
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October 1, 2008 at 12:00 AM
please get to the date asap... and to the love tooo please..... i beg you
your fic is sooo good
your fic is sooo good
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September 23, 2008 at 12:00 AM
Good chapter and that's not a bad idea writing up sakura's POV in the story i was always wondering what she was thinking and doing during some key points of the story.
anyways can't wait to read them both :)
anyways can't wait to read them both :)
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September 3, 2008 at 12:00 AM
God..... *cries* that was so beautifull... NARUSAKU FTW.... god... i love you .... update soon please... LOVE, LOVE IS SO PERFECT WITH NARU AND WITH SAKURA MORE
and please add something hot too :hehee
and please add something hot too :hehee
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August 24, 2008 at 12:00 AM
great chapter i must say, got them looking normal almost as if this is what i believe would be how they'd react if this happen in the manga and anime and i kinda wished it did. lol
anyways keep up the good work and update soon the story is awesome.
anyways keep up the good work and update soon the story is awesome.
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August 18, 2008 at 12:00 AM
You have a very thoughtful explanation of why Sakura adores Sasuke so much, yet very little insight as to why Naruto loves Sakura. I bring this up because if they were to get into a serious relationship, there needs to be something more than just sex. Does he lust after Sakura or is there something about her personality that attracts him more than just her body. Also, the way Naruto is describing love and hate shows a wisdom he does not have in the manga. So, yeah, a little off canon.
I really enjoyed the first chapter; unfortunately, I haven't read past chapter 4. To tell you the truth, it is kind of monotonous to read the same stuff you have already read, just with the addition of character annotations.
I really enjoyed the first chapter; unfortunately, I haven't read past chapter 4. To tell you the truth, it is kind of monotonous to read the same stuff you have already read, just with the addition of character annotations.
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July 22, 2008 at 12:00 AM
I'm really liking this so far. I can't wait to read what's next! =)
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July 3, 2008 at 12:00 AM
the chapter is very well written and nicely thought out :)
i think the chapter and story are great can't wait to read the next chapter.
i think the chapter and story are great can't wait to read the next chapter.
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June 17, 2008 at 12:00 AM
This is really good so far, I can't wait to read what's next =D