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for Flowers in the Sand

by theamberdragonfly

schedule August 12, 2008 at 12:00 AM
Hello? I really hope this story is not complete at all! You have just started the plot, and there are still so many questions left unanswered, What the Gobi is, will Sasuke regain his powers, will Neji marry Yumiko, what about Akatsuki and Kabuto`s organisation? Please update this story, for I feel, that this xould grow into something rreally big.
schedule June 5, 2008 at 12:00 AM
this is a great story but please update you other story "written in the stars" the suspence of what happens next is nerve racking
schedule June 2, 2008 at 12:00 AM
As an opening chapter to what is probably going to be a long story, it is okay. Of course the amosunt of information and plot is huge but that`s fine. The idea of another Jinchuuriki who does not even have the basics is an interesting one. I`d like to see more