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May 13, 2014 at 12:00 AM
enjoyed the story a lot--though at first Iruka seemed a little like a cry baby---but i still liked it. Fight scene and ending weren't crap---they just seemed rushed..might be something you want to go back and take your time reworking in the future. If not, don't worry about it, it stands fine on it's own, and I'll take a rushed ending any day where at least we know what the writer had planned for the characters over an abandoned story!
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September 18, 2009 at 12:00 AM
that was a really great story....i really enjoyed it ^___^
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March 17, 2009 at 12:00 AM
well, I'm glad that you were able to finish it at least and they lived! =)
And maybe you could make it up to us with more KakaIru goodness? ^^;
Also, your smut is not bad!
And maybe you could make it up to us with more KakaIru goodness? ^^;
Also, your smut is not bad!
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February 27, 2009 at 12:00 AM
I love the way this is written. What a cool power you gave Iruka. I can't wait to see the next chapter.
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June 24, 2008 at 12:00 AM
Cool update. Wow, what in the world is that guy? How can he be worried about Iruka killing him if Kakashi couldn't?
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June 14, 2008 at 12:00 AM
I hope you do continue this story. I enjoyed reading it.
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June 9, 2008 at 12:00 AM
good story! look forward to more. :D
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June 9, 2008 at 12:00 AM
Yahoooo, that was indeed a very hot chapter. I need a Gatorade. Dumped over my head along with the ice. Wow.
If those ANBU aren't careful they're going to get quite an eyeful, popping into the bedroom like that just to deliver a message. Next time they should send me! Ah, the fantasy world...
Great stuff!
If those ANBU aren't careful they're going to get quite an eyeful, popping into the bedroom like that just to deliver a message. Next time they should send me! Ah, the fantasy world...
Great stuff!
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June 7, 2008 at 12:00 AM
Thank goodness he's been found, now don't let him bleed out while yer smoochin', Kashi!
Looking forward to the *happiness*, and so glad for the twist...Iruka death is like kitten puppy and panda death all rolled into one! Ai!
Looking forward to the *happiness*, and so glad for the twist...Iruka death is like kitten puppy and panda death all rolled into one! Ai!
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June 6, 2008 at 12:00 AM
yay! I'm glad that Iruka is going to be ok! (aka NOT dead ^^;;; )
and *drools* yay for smut but take your time in writing/posting it, no problem waiting here =D
and *drools* yay for smut but take your time in writing/posting it, no problem waiting here =D