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June 5, 2008 at 12:00 AM
Interesting.... I give you cookies for originality and I have no doubt that as you write more your skills as a writer will grow. A very fascinating read. :)
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June 5, 2008 at 12:00 AM
oooh, excellent twist, I'm hooked! More, more!
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June 5, 2008 at 12:00 AM
Oohh so far so good. Please by all means keep going. You had me in tears and then hope again. Don't leave us hanging for long please!
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June 4, 2008 at 12:00 AM
Was that it? You did say it might be a multichapter. I hope so because i don't want Iruka to die. He was just wounded right? He gets raped ant then Kakashi helps him get passed it right? I hope so. If this is a multi-chap, keep going. It was good. Good plot. Nice use of OCs as bad guys. Good work.
Cheers
Meg
Cheers
Meg
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June 3, 2008 at 12:00 AM
Let's start off by saying that ending off with Iruka dying didn't say cliffy to me immediately (seems kinda final!); not until your author's note said cliffy - so now I'm feeling better and feeling the cliffy!
But Iruka being hunted was tense and Kakashi's on the way...I'm no longer sure if Iruka is literally dead or not...yes, you have my attention! Looking forward to the next chapter.
Very interesting!
But Iruka being hunted was tense and Kakashi's on the way...I'm no longer sure if Iruka is literally dead or not...yes, you have my attention! Looking forward to the next chapter.
Very interesting!
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June 3, 2008 at 12:00 AM
No!!!!!!!!!! *cries*
I hope that Iruka-sensei is going to be ok... well, alive at least *sweat*
and i hope that those bad guys get their heads shoved up where the sun don't shine or something like that *ninja*
can't wait to see what the next chapter holds!
I hope that Iruka-sensei is going to be ok... well, alive at least *sweat*
and i hope that those bad guys get their heads shoved up where the sun don't shine or something like that *ninja*
can't wait to see what the next chapter holds!