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for Gentle-Fist Massage: The Series

by PrplGrl

person ohitsjordan
schedule December 1, 2012 at 12:00 AM
I cried. A lot...
I'm such a whimp.
But it was a damn good fic!
schedule March 8, 2011 at 12:00 AM
For the records Icried midway and then at the end of this fic... I did to the point my husband thinks I'm PMSing. I enjoyed most of it. I just got fooled into thinking after the Shika suicide attempt and the smex that we would get something of a hapy ending... and yes there was closure but this was just... I need a chocolate bar to cheer me up from this... *sighs*
person drivven
schedule November 29, 2010 at 12:00 AM
I love this series and think you are very talented. Thank you for sharing this here.
person Nana
schedule March 2, 2010 at 12:00 AM
This was so sad, and at the same time so breathtakingly beautiful T.T
schedule February 8, 2010 at 12:00 AM
waaaaaaaaaaah! that was so sad. poor shika but at least he got closer in the end. but yd u have 2 kill neji? i was crying since he died.
person Shikeji
schedule July 22, 2009 at 12:00 AM
Well I really like your title and the plot ideas, Clearly Neji could give the best massages in the whole village. I've only read the first part though. It was good but could have been better if the characters were more in character, they weren't wrong just a bit off for me. Your descriptions were good though and the explination of the massge I loved that. Can't wait to read the rest but I'm gonna pace myself to really enjoy it instead of reading it in one go.
person Calcifer
schedule July 2, 2009 at 12:00 AM
Aaaaaawwwwu That was beautiful. It's pretty rare to encounter a fic where one of the main characters dies and stays dead. While of course i was miserable throughout the entire 4th arc, it was still spectacularly written, and I'm glad that Shikamaru now feels the ability to move on.

Keep up the good work!

~Angel
schedule March 12, 2009 at 12:00 AM
I was soooo mad when you killed Neji, but it turned out sort of okay for poor Shikamaru. It was terribly sad tho. And extremely well written. I do forgive for killing Neji, but still, it was sad and upsetting. In the end I liked this series tho. It was good. Emotional, eventful and I've run out of adverbs to define it with, so I'm gonna stop and just say Very Good Job and keep on writing!
person pinklemonade
schedule February 8, 2009 at 12:00 AM
Pink: how could you kill neji?! you big meanie!!!!
Lemonade: (covers her mouth) don't listen to her, she loves it but her tiny brain can't process multiple pairings
pink: (pushes lemonade away) i can too!!!!!!
Lemonade: oh yah? what 2789 divided by 450 multiplied by 698 minus 289? huh?
pink: (eyes starts to circle at the question) then passes out
Lemonade: nice job keep up the good work (bows)

person mississippi_brat
schedule December 24, 2008 at 12:00 AM
omg ur story mad me cry at the end. lol now my sister trying 2 find out y im crying plus i have a cold so it sounds like i cant breaht lol. anyways love ur story:D