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by knightkat

person clarame
schedule August 8, 2012 at 12:00 AM
there's style='font-size:10.0pt;mso-bidi-font-size:12.0pt'> in front of almost every paragraph (starting from chapter 3 i think) it's kinda annoying and your spacing is messed up... might want to look into that but otherwise, interesting story even though i've only read a few chapters of it before the format made me stop
person Sagerune
schedule November 15, 2010 at 12:00 AM
This is just AMAZING hon i love you and this story SOOOOOOOOOOO much
I beg of thee to updateXD
schedule September 30, 2010 at 12:00 AM
evil. Brilliant annd evil. Hillarious. some of those moments.
*wipes laughter tears
plse keepp up the good work.
person Anon
schedule September 27, 2010 at 12:00 AM
Hahaha! Liked how the prank was set up and the Kushina reference.
person animelover
schedule September 27, 2010 at 12:00 AM
omg, that was just HILARIOUS! your chappies just get funnier and funnier ... and it brings up such wonderful visuals. ;-)
schedule October 8, 2009 at 12:00 AM
I am really enjoying this story. I wonder what other mischief those 2 will get into.
schedule October 4, 2009 at 12:00 AM
<3
person animelover
schedule October 4, 2009 at 12:00 AM
loved this chapter, and i luv your writing style, especially the way kyu and naru converse. i dunno, it just seems to "real"; i could actually picture them having conversations like those. ;-)
schedule May 25, 2009 at 12:00 AM
i can beta for you if you want my email is ainsmacd@gmail.com
schedule May 25, 2009 at 12:00 AM
this makes more sense to me than any other kind of telling. i am soooooooo behind in anime and manga of this series!! *runs around screaming 'AHHHHHHHHHHH'*

any ways.... i REALLY didn't realize that you had updated so soon!! kudos to you!!!


laters!

~_^ miko