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by knightkat

person animelover
schedule January 3, 2009 at 12:00 AM
hilarious ... absolutely hilarious! you know, this would make superb anime arcs on the tv! ;-)

sorry i don't have any constructive criticism, or any criticism, to help you. I'm just a fan enjoying reading a good fic. thanks for sharing and making kyuubi seem so ... real. LOL!
person juxxy
schedule December 19, 2008 at 12:00 AM
Is English your native language? You suck at it. But the story itself is pretty good.
schedule December 19, 2008 at 12:00 AM
most deliously evil! anyways school's almost out for me so i can give better reviews!!


happy hoildays!!

miko ~_^
person animelover
schedule December 18, 2008 at 12:00 AM
loving this! the conversation between naru and danzou was so totally funny; and poor sai, left out of the loop.

can't wait for your next chapter ... please let there be more pranks somewhere down the road!
schedule December 18, 2008 at 12:00 AM
GREAT chapter!!! Awesomeness. I almost forgot that this story originally had a somewhat meandering plot weaved into all the drabbles. ^^ I really love the Root history you've given Naruto. His playing with Danzo was artfully done. Heh.

Keep up the great work!
schedule November 30, 2008 at 12:00 AM
oh my.

humanity sure does ruin everything, doesn't it? we make great villains.
person ani'
schedule November 29, 2008 at 12:00 AM
whoa, totally cool! i just reread this last night wondering when you would up date. woot! and man, are you ever down with the details. can't wait to see what you come up with next? hey, can we have kyuubi show off his human form in a chapter sometime?
schedule November 16, 2008 at 12:00 AM
lol silly ^^
person KuroiHato
schedule October 11, 2008 at 12:00 AM
OMG! I was looking for this and when I saw it had new chapters- I almost screamed, but it was like, 2:30 am and I didn't want to get in trouble so I squealed like a fangirl in my head! I absuoltly love love LOVE this story- it's funny, dramtic, and I like when Kyuubi and Naruto mess with the Uchihas! It's so awseomly awesome that it's a new level of awesome! Ohyeah! *takes a deep breath* I said that to quickly... Now I feel dizzy... @.@
schedule October 5, 2008 at 12:00 AM
bwa hahaha..., this chapter was too funny. I love the idea of Naruto picking out loop holes and plot points of InuYasha -- and a further down the line story of what was eventually to come. ^^ hehehe


Great chapter. Keep up the good work.